I Still Remember

By xX pretty vacant Xx

i still remember
when you said you'd be there forever
and i still remember
when they told me you were gone
and i still remember
seeing all those cuts and bruises
and i still remember
long ago when there were none

and i still remember
when you'd smile and life was perfect
and i still remember
when my whole existance was you
and i still remember
when you told me you wished you were dead
and i still remember
when you made that wish come true

and i still remember
when you'd say not to wreck my eyeliner
and i still remember
when it ran with all the tears
and i still remember
when you weren't there to stop them
and i still remember
me wishing that you were still here

and i still remember
how much it hurt you to smile
and i still remember
how you'd kiss away the pain
and i still remember
when you ran out of kisses
and i still remember
everything fading to grey

and i still remember
when you promised me you'd be there
and i still remember
but i guess that i dont care
and i still remember
when perfection turned to a wreck
and i still remember
but i think i'd sooner forget...


xXx-for-aaron-xXx

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Copyright 2003 Laura
Published on Thursday, November 6, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • MorganaRose On Wednesday, October 31, 2012, MorganaRose (75)By person wrote:

    You can truly feel your pain in this piece. It's emotional and haunting. Very well written.

  • A former member wrote: I can tell you, this poem brought tears to my eyes... The pain you portray is so heartfelt... This is a beautiful portray of that pain... Amazing

  • A former member wrote: Wow man that was very very good!!!

  • A former member wrote: this was perfect, thank you so much for sharing you pain in a beautiful way. i haven't cried over a poem in a long time. your words are beautiful..

  • Sin On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    tragic yet lovely in its pain...

  • GothicBlack On Monday, October 24, 2005, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    this is heartwrenching. I could feel my heart breaking with the sorrow in this poem. It's an emotional poem. ~gothic~

  • A former member wrote: that was nice, I liked the form and the flow, but most of all the emotion, great.

  • A former member wrote: That is bloody awsome mate, really is!! i give it a 9/10!! :)

  • A former member wrote: incredible

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Thursday, December 9, 2004, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    I loved it, it flows wonderfully. def going on faves---steph

  • aXe FactoR On Wednesday, June 2, 2004, aXe FactoR (333)By person wrote:

    a very sad lingering feel to it... nice write. :)

  • Beautiful Scars On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    defintly going on my favorites

  • Beautiful Scars On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    Wow, I loved this..its so sad..

  • Drea On Saturday, May 8, 2004, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    this made me cry. the emotion and the overwhelming feeling of sorrow. very well done.

  • A former member wrote: wow that is so sad.. :-\ hm this made me cry.. uhm i really like the way you wrote this. =)

  • DeathSentance On Saturday, January 17, 2004, DeathSentance (17)By person wrote:

    OMG that is totally amazing...I want to cry...that is going on my favorites list

  • GothicBlack On Thursday, November 6, 2003, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    Theres so much emotion in here, i wonder if there's some truth to this. At any rate, how sad... but yet still beautiful. i likes. ~gothic~

  • Rebel_Angel On Thursday, November 6, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I really like this too! I think it is great.

  • A former member wrote: this si a really good write, i like the story, and it flows with your words

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