I Still Remember
By xX pretty vacant Xx
i still remember
when you said you'd be there forever
and i still remember
when they told me you were gone
and i still remember
seeing all those cuts and bruises
and i still remember
long ago when there were none
and i still remember
when you'd smile and life was perfect
and i still remember
when my whole existance was you
and i still remember
when you told me you wished you were dead
and i still remember
when you made that wish come true
and i still remember
when you'd say not to wreck my eyeliner
and i still remember
when it ran with all the tears
and i still remember
when you weren't there to stop them
and i still remember
me wishing that you were still here
and i still remember
how much it hurt you to smile
and i still remember
how you'd kiss away the pain
and i still remember
when you ran out of kisses
and i still remember
everything fading to grey
and i still remember
when you promised me you'd be there
and i still remember
but i guess that i dont care
and i still remember
when perfection turned to a wreck
and i still remember
but i think i'd sooner forget...
xXx-for-aaron-xXx
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Comments on "I Still Remember"
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On Wednesday, October 31, 2012, MorganaRose
(75) wrote:
You can truly feel your pain in this piece. It's emotional and haunting. Very well written.
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A former member wrote:
I can tell you, this poem brought tears to my eyes... The pain you portray is so heartfelt... This is a beautiful portray of that pain... Amazing
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A former member wrote:
Wow man that was very very good!!!
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A former member wrote:
this was perfect, thank you so much for sharing you pain in a beautiful way. i haven't cried over a poem in a long time. your words are beautiful..
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On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, Sin
(1135) wrote:
tragic yet lovely in its pain...
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On Monday, October 24, 2005, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
this is heartwrenching. I could feel my heart breaking with the sorrow in this poem. It's an emotional poem. ~gothic~
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A former member wrote:
that was nice, I liked the form and the flow, but most of all the emotion, great.
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A former member wrote:
That is bloody awsome mate, really is!! i give it a 9/10!! :)
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A former member wrote:
incredible
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On Thursday, December 9, 2004, Black_Cherry_Doll_
(69) wrote:
I loved it, it flows wonderfully. def going on faves---steph
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On Wednesday, June 2, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
a very sad lingering feel to it... nice write. :)
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
defintly going on my favorites
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
Wow, I loved this..its so sad..
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On Saturday, May 8, 2004, Drea
(1388) wrote:
this made me cry. the emotion and the overwhelming feeling of sorrow. very well done.
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A former member wrote:
wow that is so sad.. :-\ hm this made me cry.. uhm i really like the way you wrote this. =)
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On Saturday, January 17, 2004, DeathSentance
(17) wrote:
OMG that is totally amazing...I want to cry...that is going on my favorites list
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On Thursday, November 6, 2003, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
Theres so much emotion in here, i wonder if there's some truth to this. At any rate, how sad... but yet still beautiful. i likes. ~gothic~
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On Thursday, November 6, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I really like this too! I think it is great.
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A former member wrote:
this si a really good write, i like the story, and it flows with your words