To All The Fucking Heroes

By xX pretty vacant Xx

could you fix a porcelain heart
and heal a broken soul?
could you mend a thousand scars
make this life seem a little less old?

could you kiss away the tears
and never tell anyone else?
could you make me dream in colour
and save me from myself?

cos wounds will heal
and scars will fade
but i still feel them
and they don't go away
bruises are hidden
and mirrors can lie
pretty plastic image
but it's all fake in my eyes

could you take a shattered life
and make it something new?
could you take a dying heart
and hold it close to you?

could you feel this perfect anger
and be there when i cry?
could you take me by the hand
and bring me back to life?

i only ask
because i'm afraid
and there's nothing there
to get me through today
i'm only screaming
to try make you see
past the pretty plastic image
this is the real me

i only ask
cos i'm so fucking afraid
and i can't find a thing
to help me through today...

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Copyright 2004 xX pretty vacant Xx
Published on Thursday, January 1, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Musical. Effective. Beautiful. Loved it from the very beginning. You have some epic talent :)

  • A former member wrote: I loved this.

  • A former member wrote: the ending... that's what i'm feeling now...

  • A former member wrote: that was very good, i'm kind of critical when it comes to poetry since i love it so much. and that was really fuckin good, it sounds a lot like a reflection of myself, even my poetry. i love it.

  • xserratedsoulx On Monday, February 20, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    rubbing it in my face and there's nothing they can do to save me. ~lauren~

  • xserratedsoulx On Monday, February 20, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    love it love it love it...we're studying hero lit. in school right now, beowolf and such, and all i keep thinking is "SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!" that's great, that they killed monsters and all, but they could stop rubbing it in my face and there's nothing they

  • so_skeevy On Saturday, April 2, 2005, so_skeevy (64)By person wrote:

    wow, i love it.

  • A former member wrote: That is.. the color of pure black. Pain without exceptions. Wonderful.

  • DarkWolf On Friday, September 10, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    A wonderful, pain-filled work. Cold with the feeling of truth. Fantastic job. -Michael

  • Simply Me On Saturday, September 4, 2004, Simply Me (40)By person wrote:

    Bravo! Awesome write, loved it from start to finish.

  • A former member wrote: "i'm only screaming to try make you see past the pretty plastic image this is the real me" amazing! everything about this pome is soo tuching

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, July 24, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    nah dude.. but I can grow class and save your silly ass from the sentinals .. err.. got carryed away there for awhile . loved the poem. nice start and finish

  • Storm On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    Perfect. The whole. Jikes this was a good write!

  • physicalgraffiti On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, physicalgraffiti (56)By person wrote:

    jaw-opening...genius. i loved this. great write

  • Drifter On Sunday, January 4, 2004, Drifter (265)By person wrote:

    Badass! This is wonderful, great work!

  • Jaded Jezzabelle On Friday, January 2, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle (328)By person wrote:

    Great write..."pretty plastic image but its all fake to me" I love that line...this is going on my favs!!!!

  • Tracer On Thursday, January 1, 2004, Tracer (99)By person wrote:

    The whole entire piece flowed, I especially liked "could you feel this perfect anger, and be there when i cry?"...very emotional...^vTracerv^ Scholar

  • TornPaperDoll On Thursday, January 1, 2004, TornPaperDoll (63)By person wrote:

    "To all the fucking heroes" perfect! TPD

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, January 1, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    I thank Amber here for pointing out this poem. It is great. I really like it cuz it represents the other end of the spectrum on a piece I just wrote. *sigh* Awesome. :::OLd

  • A former member wrote: OMFG. my mouth is honestly wide opened right now if i wasn't so damned lazy i would stand and clap for you. this is amazing, brilliant, lovely, all of the above, BRAVO! DPMAIL ME. nvm, i will u. ~B/P

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