Comments by TornPaperDoll
- "This is horrible...why does it seem that victims of sexual abuse are targeted more than once throughout their lives...i cannot say i know but i do hope you can work through this.TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "Forget" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "yeah, that's a lot better. i love your work use every bit of anger, frustration, and what-not that you have...it does your work good!"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "That look" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "AAhhh..this i love. very nice, i think we've all felt this way before esp. the part about "i wish i never fucked you." i've thought that a time or two. am i right?! lol. TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "I wish" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "sorry..i've commented on every poem of yours, but this one i love the most...ima keep my eye on you...you've gotta lotta potential.the whole thing's perfect from title to last line. i look forward to what's to come. TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "Josh" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "ya know, i often write about things that i don't understand-suicide, abuse, harming one's self- in order to understand it. i hope that that is what this is i hope you don't really see yourself slitting your wrists. nice write tho.TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "That look" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "Hmmm...yeah those one night stands without the rubber always ends like this. lol. i like the anger here. you do well with non-rhyming poems, it still flows well. good job. TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "Fuck you" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "i love the first half up to "i die in your arms now you feel me" this half is very strong and vivid the end kinda loses me...but nice work.ima read more of u.TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "I sit and cry" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- ""Twinkling little eyes Oh so scraed to see All the pretty lies Of what I'll never be" Ahh..this i like! TPD."
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "Concubine" by Linwe
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