I sit and cry

By AnGeLbLuEyEs1201

I sit and cry you don’t hear me
I stand and scream you don’t hear me
I want to die and you don’t see me
I want to love you, you don’t see me
I hand you my heart you don’t feel it
I give you my soul you don’t feel it
I say I hate you now you hear me
I cut my wrist now you see me
I die in your arms now you feel me

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
© 2006 Pleasejustkillme
Published on Wednesday, May 10, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "I sit and cry"

Log in to post comments.
  • mywristshurt On Tuesday, October 3, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    it still tares me apart... i needed this angst because i am in a depressing mood... im thinking anger may help.. its still a great write

  • mywristshurt On Thursday, May 18, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    damn.. this is good... for that person to just see and you want them to know how badly you feel, and they just don't know.. and then to show them that it could be somebody elses life if they don't bother to look... this is amazing.. its definatly a fav.

  • A former member wrote: hmmmmmm *ponders the reversal in perspective* well, I love the concept... but I would prefer (and this matters not, so please nevermind) you killing him and then him knowing how you feel ;)~ very enticing twist of pov

  • A former member wrote: kinda reminds me of 'this love' by pantera.. 'i'd kill my self for you, I'd kill you for myself' (I prefer the latter half of the chiasmus

  • TornPaperDoll On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, TornPaperDoll (63)By person wrote:

    i love the first half up to "i die in your arms now you feel me" this half is very strong and vivid the end kinda loses me...but nice work.ima read more of u.TPD

Contribution Level

Poets Bookmarking This Work
AnGeLbLuEyEs1201's Favorite Poets
AnGeLbLuEyEs1201's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.