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I sit and cry
By AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
I sit and cry you don’t hear me
I stand and scream you don’t hear me
I want to die and you don’t see me
I want to love you, you don’t see me
I hand you my heart you don’t feel it
I give you my soul you don’t feel it
I say I hate you now you hear me
I cut my wrist now you see me
I die in your arms now you feel me
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© 2006 Pleasejustkillme
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On Tuesday, October 3, 2006, mywristshurt
(408)
wrote:
it still tares me apart... i needed this angst because i am in a depressing mood... im thinking anger may help.. its still a great write
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On Thursday, May 18, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
damn.. this is good... for that person to just see and you want them to know how badly you feel, and they just don't know.. and then to show them that it could be somebody elses life if they don't bother to look... this is amazing.. its definatly a fav.
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A former member wrote:
hmmmmmm *ponders the reversal in perspective* well, I love the concept... but I would prefer (and this matters not, so please nevermind) you killing him and then him knowing how you feel ;)~ very enticing twist of pov
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A former member wrote:
kinda reminds me of 'this love' by pantera.. 'i'd kill my self for you, I'd kill you for myself' (I prefer the latter half of the chiasmus
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, TornPaperDoll
(63) wrote:
i love the first half up to "i die in your arms now you feel me" this half is very strong and vivid the end kinda loses me...but nice work.ima read more of u.TPD
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