Fucking on Film
By Six-Out
Hint: Not for those un-loving of the sexual word games.
Not for the young eyes, either.
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[act 1]our own movie begins
the static gives way to a portrait
lain on the bed
eyes aglow with passion...
mouthing the words of seduction
playing to the lens
as your hands move the lengths of your body
calling me with your moans
of lust
the frame shakes as the scene
begins to take focus
I circle you- as you play to the camera
"put it down...and come to me"
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[act 2]and your body is bare before me
negligent to all surroundings
as your hands begin to work-
/I so eagerly await --to take their place
my lips touch your skin
kissing away all inhibition- from the feet up
your body quakes as I graze your perfection
my breath accenting your need
"kiss me"
-my lips, touch yours
and slowly work their way to your neck
/you pull me closer as I-
whisper sweet words of pleasure
in your ear...as I lick my way down
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my tongue caressing your body-
you moan/with pleasure- maybe ecstasy
"take me"
[act 3]sweat pours from you
as you climb on top
-you love the feel of _me/inside
or so your nails in my chest
lead me to believe
the sound of me-meeting-you
in a symphony of [us]
as your screams echo the halls
and your nails pierce my skin
with your fiery exuberance
"fuck me"
I pull your- hair back/ as you let out a [scream]
and your body _quivers. as you
fall onto me
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kissing down my chest
your devil-ish eyes peer up at me
intent on giving me what I gave you
[act 4]you have complete control
as you circle me- gliding your hands
_over my flesh. loving it
this night is now yours
--and your eyes tell me/ enough
to know it's far
from over
Comments on "Fucking on Film"
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A former member wrote:
I read this a few years back but I didn't comment. What a unique poem.
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A former member wrote:
this one has a good progression. i felt some of the line breaks or characters (i.e.: / and _) were a bit distracting--but that could have just been the sexy content. ;)
erotica isn't easy to accomplish. good work here.
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On Friday, May 4, 2012, Carmina Gitana
(149) wrote:
I have to say, I really, REALLY enjoyed this . . . even though the title made Duran Duran play in my head for a second :) All kidding aside, great, great piece of erotic writing, and I appreciate the restraint when it it comes to "naughty" words - makes it so much more subtle and pervasive.
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A former member wrote:
Very nice writing. it's very open and revealing, I like that.
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On Sunday, April 19, 2009, Shortnlethal
(65) wrote:
lol "fucking on flim" your more corning than i thought lol...enjoyment to read so late when im looking up radom piece came across this and it made me laugh..thanx for the laughter so late at night ^^
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On Friday, November 2, 2007, Niemand
(355) wrote:
You know, as much as I hate to admit it, this is pretty damn good! *grins* 'Fucking on Film' Love the title...-Airi
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On Monday, November 27, 2006, Morbid_insanity
(74) wrote:
I cant thank of anything to say, It left me utterly speechless. It was just that good. Freakin awesome ~Josh
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On Saturday, November 11, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
this might sound weird but this: [act 3]sweat pours from you " is my fav. line of the whole thing.
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A former member wrote:
I agree with Gothic Symphony on this one. Good job.
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On Friday, September 15, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
Dear god...I think I need a thousand cold showers before I'm me again.. this was fucking awesome*bookmarks* Fucking on film indeed...O.o~Gothic
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A former member wrote:
DAMN. DUDE, AWESOME. THANX FOR THT, LOL.*******!!!
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On Thursday, May 25, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Jon, I now want sex.
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On Thursday, May 25, 2006, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Thought this would exsplain how some guy with a toolbox and a little oil on his chin allways gets down and nasty with the big boobed blonds.. :P Great write Jon
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, TornPaperDoll
(63) wrote:
oh my god...this is a good piece...i've tried to write a good sex poem, but nah, mine was useless. this is hot. TPD
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On Friday, April 7, 2006, Vicious Pixie
(58) wrote:
sexy.... i loved it
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A former member wrote:
can i read it again? if i was a guy i'd have a serious boner dude... but the last part dragged me back to reality... i do love it
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On Monday, September 26, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
not as smooth as some of your others, but it has its own rawness the lends a hand to make it a fun read
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On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
I wish this never ended. I wanted to keep reading it forever. This was raw, amazing, and so fucking beautiful. I'm in love with it. -kitty
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, Mahakala
(207) wrote:
*thinks of all the things I would to on you & to you* Damn...*runs to catch the next plane to TX*
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On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
That was actually over the top with a classy approach, nice blend of sexuality and adoration. *nods head* ~b
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On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
.....fuckme.....damn.....
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On Wednesday, November 17, 2004, Atalanta
(37) wrote:
Everytime I read this it just makes me want to go and fuck a random hot guy! I fucking love this, Six!
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On Tuesday, November 16, 2004, Atalanta
(37) wrote:
Well well well. This put Dirty Dirk and Nash-ty STeve to shame. Very well done!~Atalanta
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On Friday, November 5, 2004, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
well well, i knew ya had it IN you...or would that be she had it in her..YUM..you know I love the sexy porn poems..Give us more Sixxie..
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On Monday, November 1, 2004, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
sexy story teller....... damned original and still rocking my world. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
wow. ......wow. ...wow. im speechless. this was a piece of fucking art. you are a work in itself. i never dreamt the day that you would write something so attractive and desireable. beautiful masterpiece, i must say.
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
awwwwwww, that's so romantic!
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On Monday, October 4, 2004, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
six, just so you know this does not qualify you as a bigger slut than me, just a more sincere one....but seriously, this was a great piece, soft and genuine, reminds me of things I've been doing here even though I'm not supposed to...>Raven
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On Sunday, October 3, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
Six, this is beautiful and erotic,makes me want to give myself to you ~kristy
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, ColdScaredAlone
(77) wrote:
awesome! reminds me of my dream of death..hee curse you, corrupting my 'young eyes'!!! nicely done though :)
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
::takes a cold shower:: Gosh this is really great! So..... About that trip... :winks: Bethany!
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
Poetic porn..you've gotta love that. :) *~seraph~*
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Rachel
(210) wrote:
Well then... I think I need a shower or a cigarette. Maybe both. Yes, definitely both.
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A former member wrote:
This is enchanting...you have that way of romancing moments...I don't think this was quite fucking...it was more making love. But I understand how that isn't quite the same title-wise. ;-)
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, FallenFaith
(44) wrote:
I love how it's seperated into acts. Anyone can get attention by writing of sex, but when you can do it when the only dirty things is the title, you know you have done a good job.
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
This is very well done.. excellent work. Tender and sensual throughout.. slowly building to the end. -Michael
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
Michael took the words right out of my head. Astounding job hon. Lovely in it's softness and sensuality. -Doe
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
i agree, perfect timing for me as well. i really like this, its not all intenstly sexual..because there is a softness and genuiness in it as well.. loved the first two stanzas, which basically set it all off.. "the static gives way to a portrait", lovely
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, elisa
(1595) wrote:
Late Friday night...I'm all alone... and I read this.......perfect timing Six:) elisa
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A former member wrote:
Apparently the hint at the top didn't work.. Because once I'd read that I just had to continue. Very pretty, erotic work.. Niice. :)
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Revolting Theatre
(31) wrote:
Six...you dog.
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
You love it.