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Josh
By AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
I hate you
I hate everything about you
I hate the way you make me smile
I hate the way you make me cry
I hate how you make me want to die
I hate that I fell in love with you
I hate that it hurts so much
I hate that I need to feel you
I hate that I fucked you
I hate that I cant stand you
I hate that I know its over
I hate that I want you so much
I hate that I trusted you
I hate that I think your sexy
I hate that my friends like you
I hate that I want to scream
I hate that I meant everything I told you
I hate that I miss you
I hate that I let you in
I hate that I miss your kiss
But most of all I hate that I hate you
And I hate that I love you
I HATE YOU
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© 2006 Pleasejustkillme
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On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Emptyness Inside Me
(171)
wrote:
i agree with amanda (tornpaperdoll) you did a great job, i really like this, you have great potential, the only thing i dont like about this is the title, other than that great job ~Josh~
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, TornPaperDoll
(63) wrote:
sorry..i've commented on every poem of yours, but this one i love the most...ima keep my eye on you...you've gotta lotta potential.the whole thing's perfect from title to last line. i look forward to what's to come. TPD
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A former member wrote:
I can relate to that all to well, sounds like my situation with my ex. very powerful and emotional... brough some tears to my eyes. awesome piece.
hope things get better.-monika
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