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Please Explain
By TornPaperDoll
Explain to me
How “I’m sorry” makes it better
Does it really only take
For those two words to be together?
Clarify to me
That you didn’t mean for this
That the heartache that I feel
Was just a “hit and miss”
Please illuminate to me
The story, oh so clear
Because the way that I’m hearing it
Is as if you didn’t care
And my heart can not take much more
From this prodding that you do
And it isn’t revenge you seek
For I’ve been nothing but perfect to you.
So, when you tell me that you’re sorry
And that you love me with all your might
Is it your word of truth you stand by?
Or is it said in fright?
Because you know the woman I am
And might it be that you’re ashamed
Of what I’ve given to be with you
Yet…you’ve never done the same.
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© 2006 TornPaperDoll
Published on Wednesday, March 22, 2006.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Please Explain"
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A former member wrote:
Such raw pain and emotions spread out into the screen; we can practically feel ourselves in your shoes throgh the flow of your words
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, Grey Lies
(186)
wrote:
saddens me..."sorry" does it make things better?...simple words, simple meaning. great write.
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Ouchie...this blows me away to the moon and star...With such raw emotions like Emptyness states....Nice job:D
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
So powerful and honest, such raw emotions here, as always I am almosst left speachless, your way of words just intrigues me so, I wish I had half your talent Amanda Great Job ~Josh~
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, TornPaperDoll
(63) wrote:
**blushes**
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