Comments by Tracer
- "Funny the hypocracy that follows the notions of being a romantic...misunderstood, and then called out when you finally give in.
A poet at heart, brah, thats all you need to be. Saddening story (excellent crafting) that continually plays out...Corey"
Posted by Tracer on "hopelessly.poetic." by Six-Out
- "Remarkably sad...ever bruise, every ache, ever pain in "him" I could feel. And the imagery used throughout was magnificant, I saw the beauty that Belle held, and the dischord caused by her failed realization. This poem was so cold...I felt as if Winter "
Posted by Tracer on "Broken Beauty" by Bellezza
- "As the piece was of a dancer, was the piece a dance itself; be it a dark dance, but the flow was choice, and I especially liked, "the notes ring a pounding
resonation
portraying her desperate
motivation," which I believe set the whole poem into its own"
Posted by Tracer on "The Ballet Dancer" by Bellezza
- ""It’s because you are blind
And furthermore
You don’t know what it feels like."
I am in agreeance with Innocent Acts Of Violence, meter and tempo changes, magnificant flow, excellent write, buddy"
Posted by Tracer on "Aren't you?" by TheBardOfBlasphemy
- "Sort of a parable, or a fable that speaks a lesson, and a good lesson to learn...simple, but effective."
Posted by Tracer on "Black Sheep" by AnarKoRn
- "That was rather direct, although not my kind of poem, as with anth, I guess for its type, nice write. Guess this was very straight-forward, sometimes that is needed...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "me & you" by sixsixnine
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