The Song of Mother Earth to her Beloved Phoenix

By mysticventures

Rise my love

Take flight my love

Let my winds cleanse you

Of the ash and soot

Of your rebirth

Fly my love

Be free my love

Let my winds carry you

To the nowhere of your

Never ending journey

Live my love

Take care my love

Until we are one once more

In the cleansing fire

Of your rebirth

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Published on Monday, December 20, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "The Song of Mother Earth to her Beloved Phoenix"

On Wednesday, February 22, 2023, mysticventures (538) wrote:

Thank you Carlos..too kind
On Tuesday, February 21, 2023, carlosjackal (3011) wrote:

Soft, beautiful and profound all at the same time.
On Monday, May 9, 2005, ONEANDLONELY (117) wrote:

Could not have been better said. I search for great things and here is one.
On Friday, April 22, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555) wrote:

beautiful write. I can't even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this write ~*~Tart~*~
On Friday, January 14, 2005, mysticventures (538) wrote:

always my pleasure kristy :)
On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, Sin (1168) wrote:

this was beautiful and lovely, your works always leave me inspired and smiling, thank you ~kristy
On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, mysticventures (538) wrote:

my thanks and love to you Zhee :)
On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, Zhee (529) wrote:

"To the nowhere of your Never ending journey" you always astound me with the way you can capture the most profound concepts and express them with such artistry and elegance! a joy to read!
A former member wrote: I've never really been fond of the Phoenix yet your words make it appealing.
On Tuesday, December 21, 2004, Mr King (547) wrote:

Well done bro... this a favorite... Have a Merry X-mas & Happy New Year, Seth
On Monday, December 20, 2004, elisa (1616) wrote:

You bring life back through the ashes of the Phoenix....beautiful:) elisa
On Monday, December 20, 2004, VenomPlease (134) wrote:

Awesome. You did an excellent job of getting your point across with so few words.
On Monday, December 20, 2004, ShadowFlight (105) wrote:

Lovely capture- I picture the moment, rolling down the runway when lift overcomes gravity and I rise out of the dust... lovely write!