The Song of Mother Earth to her Beloved Phoenix

By mysticventures




Rise my love

Take flight my love

Let my winds cleanse you

Of the ash and soot

Of your rebirth


Fly my love

Be free my love

Let my winds carry you

To the nowhere of your

Never ending journey


Live my love

Take care my love

Until we are one once more

In the cleansing fire

Of your rebirth


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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Monday, December 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • mysticventures On Wednesday, February 22, 2023, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    Thank you Carlos..too kind

  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, February 21, 2023, carlosjackal (2786)By person wrote:

    Soft, beautiful and profound all at the same time.

  • ONEANDLONELY On Monday, May 9, 2005, ONEANDLONELY (114)By person wrote:

    Could not have been better said. I search for great things and here is one.

  • Kinkypoptart On Friday, April 22, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    beautiful write. I can't even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this write ~*~Tart~*~

  • mysticventures On Friday, January 14, 2005, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    always my pleasure kristy :)

  • Sin On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this was beautiful and lovely, your works always leave me inspired and smiling, thank you ~kristy

  • mysticventures On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    my thanks and love to you Zhee :)

  • Zhee On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    "To the nowhere of your Never ending journey" you always astound me with the way you can capture the most profound concepts and express them with such artistry and elegance! a joy to read!

  • A former member wrote: I've never really been fond of the Phoenix yet your words make it appealing.

  • Mr King On Tuesday, December 21, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    Well done bro... this a favorite... Have a Merry X-mas & Happy New Year, Seth

  • elisa On Monday, December 20, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    You bring life back through the ashes of the Phoenix....beautiful:) elisa

  • VenomPlease On Monday, December 20, 2004, VenomPlease (134)By person wrote:

    Awesome. You did an excellent job of getting your point across with so few words.

  • ShadowFlight On Monday, December 20, 2004, ShadowFlight (105)By person wrote:

    Lovely capture- I picture the moment, rolling down the runway when lift overcomes gravity and I rise out of the dust... lovely write!

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