genetically grown happiness
By GoldenLotus
searching
eternally
for peace
in these times of war
blood shed tears
fall
like crimson angels
cast from heaven
these stones
from our baskets
drawn,
are the lines that separate us by man kind's opinions
said,
are the words that label us by society's ignorance
heard,
are the lies spread through your religion
felt,
are the emotions of shooting stars
cascading across the sky
abstract movements
of a revolution
diluted
with the politics of
american ways
if you are to see freedom
you must first walk in disillusion
lead by armies
of government idiocy
reality
this painful reminder
of life
going through my days
this dizzy drunken daze
the eye in we
must learn to see
that which can not be seen
letting go of what we know
in order to learn more
shackled at our ankles
our possessiveness
these materialistic
social standings
filling our emptiness with
genetically grown happiness
whatever is
economically viable
for mass consumption
is all part of our social domestication
peek now into my closet
tori's blue dress hangs there (between the skeletons)
she loaned it to me
back in january
wear it with your sorrows
like stains
for their judgment to see
cast now those opinions
your stones
your sins
so stunning
so numbing
the effect it has on me
even
neo-america crumbles
within these towers of a new world babylon
when they were never built
with intentions of standing tall
Comments on "genetically grown happiness"
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A former member wrote:
outstanding! And what's more, you know your History :) Witnesses to the slow decline of a civilization, walking despondantly (sp?) through cities in ruin by our own greed and hate. Control is ours less every day
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, Mr King
(547) wrote:
one word... favorite... glad to see you are posting your bad ass works here... CHRIST VICE and GoTHiCPiXie are ONE... 1 LOVE 1 WORLD 1 PEACE...
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On Monday, February 16, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
mcbrilliant, supersized... with an order of curly fries... only thing that bugged me was the amos name dropping... but it only bugged me a little bit, as it seemed to fit...
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On Monday, February 16, 2004, GoldenLotus
(47) wrote:
ty, fish for your comments on my work...i enjoy reading anything that you have to write about my peices. it is much appreciated...PiXie
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On Monday, February 16, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
this however: ' abstract movements of a revolution ...diluted... with the politics of american ways ' ran tingles down my spine... a sentiment expressed in this that i totally agree with. excellent, insightful write.
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On Monday, February 16, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
i yearn for the true revolution to rear it's beautifully chaotic head... but i always remember you can take a revolution to heart, but you can't make it think... (hehe... that was clever of me)
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On Friday, February 13, 2004, Methos
(121) wrote:
Such passionate views on the subject...i find myself lost in thought with your words, i do apologize for not commenting sooner, i just returned from a long trip....great work...-Methos
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On Monday, February 16, 2004, GoldenLotus
(47) wrote:
i am a passionate writer and am grateful that u can read that through the lines of my work...ty, for the great comment...PiXie
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On Thursday, February 12, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
sensational work...beautifully written. I especially like "wear it with your sorrows" - so simple but so effective. FF
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On Thursday, February 12, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
this was a slice of genius , so glad i happened upon it - you never know by the name you click ,,, glad i clicked yours --- thankyou ... funguy
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On Friday, February 6, 2004, birdwell
(138) wrote:
that was astounding ~db~
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On Friday, February 6, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
Wow.. that next to the last verse was AMAZING. It grabbed me. Great great work. :::OLd
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On Friday, February 6, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
anything i'd have to say would simply be an echo of OLd's comment here... but still... ditto! purr
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On Friday, February 6, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Woa, you told me you were working a new piece, but you didn't tell me it was this good. Wonderful work here pixie.
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A former member wrote:
"the emotions of fallen stars
stretched across the sky..." Such powerful images you have created. Beautiful. ~Wish Upon A Star