Comments by malevolencefixation
- "In response to this part of your commentary, I wasn't writing it from a personal view. The metaphor that is carried obviously through the poem is trees. It was not a singular tree, therefore I did not want it to be about a singular person. I feel that society as a whole right now is on a fast track to having absolutely no morals. I tried to demonstrate that, and I'm sorry you weren't able to get that out of the poem. The concept of the poem as a whole was repetition... It's about seasons, which are on a constant cycle of repetition. I like the first three lines, because although redundant, they make me feel a certain kind of suspense. The entire thing was supposed to be read at an urgent, fast pace. I'm also not sure to what you are referring about grammar mistakes? I was always under the impression that a poetic license allows me to bend the rules of grammar a tad, if you will. I'm sorry you weren't a fan. Cheers to you too! "
Posted by malevolencefixation on "Skeletons" by malevolencefixation
- "I think we may simply have different styles. I enjoy repetition. It hooks me to have some repition due to the lack if rhyme in the poem. I appreciate the comment though. Poetry is just such a diverse thing. We can't all like everything I suppose"
Posted by malevolencefixation on "Skeletons" by malevolencefixation
- "This is so sad and touching. Remembering people as they looked at their funerals is depressing. I guess it just further points out how separate our minds and bodies are. So separate, that even our appearance changes when the presence of our minds are gone. Great poem"
Posted by malevolencefixation on "The First Time I Saw You in a Dress" by Bashost
