infinitus amicas gregorius

By NikesRain










a one
in a million
chance
to be blessed
that grace
should touch
my harsh days
in soft spoken
sincerity and solace

if he could manifest
over the miles
here to me
at the first fall
of heavy tears
i would imagine
it would be
like the sound
of an owl
taking flight

that soft
rush of air
phantasmal
elegant
dreamwhispered
and consoling
that makes
everything slow
to the speed
of a sigh

every doubt
the nagging fears
all the aching
would race
to incinerate
against the hearts
of stars
just because
he would
pick me up
compassionate
and his eyes
would tell me

it's ok angel
i'm here































for my vigilant watchman

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© 2008 drd
Published on Wednesday, April 9, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I loved every line. wonderfully writen, and write on.......~S

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, April 21, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Beautiful piece! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Taunting The Reaper On Monday, April 21, 2008, Taunting The Reaper (169)By person wrote:

    Mastery... I yearn to read each word. Beautiful, as though I were not worthy to read such things. Always a fan....---fallen---

  • elisa On Thursday, April 10, 2008, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    true compassion... a rare treasure indeed. beautiful

  • caustic ink On Thursday, April 10, 2008, caustic ink (2)By person wrote:

    absolutely beautiful. and i am sure that someone could use the exact same words while describing what your friendship means to them. k*t

  • A former member wrote: very nice.

  • A former member wrote: beautiful as always. and oh so touched. ~ hdb.

  • A former member wrote: *sigh* Wistful and it makes me sad when it's supposed to be a hopeful, happy thing. Wait, today's Weds. I'm not allowed to be sad today. I'll come back and read this on Friday. :) In all seriousness, this was beautiful, Doe. Reminds me of a longing I think I've given up on. You are always so careful in your craft, words chosen so economically and precise. Beh...I'll come back later...

  • NikesRain On Friday, April 11, 2008, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    damn woman, some day i'm going to write something to purposely make you laugh your ass off or at least smile... :P and you can have any of my happy days you want :P

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Wednesday, April 9, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (357)By person wrote:

    Beautiful, once again... One of these days I'll get an upgrade and you'll be surprised by a jump in your statistics :P

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