Ethereal Waves (w/the immaculate NikesPleasure)

By knightmirror

watering can full of all
lifestering
in, on and
around
this fluid flowing in arteries
draped upon death like a shawl
stopestering
heartsand
ground

look me in my 3rd eye
and tell me if you
see me differently

Follow the rivulets
rustedium drops
as they fall
from the
leakingdom
crystalipped memories
changelic
song twists

listen to my breathing
and tell me what
you hear me singing

dancing in wingscattered
formallying
above,beyond,and
beneath
these conjured clouds that
contort this beautiful chorus that
repeatshrieks
pluckedry
of tears

glidementional embrace
trapsentimental
through, over and
within
Dreamused cracked reality
distortionslaught catching wishadows
surreality of darkness
fallingrace
voidyllic
floating blind

sifting through hindsight
paying attention to peripheral
soulsearching
likewisecracks
stepped over
keeping in tact
my unbroken back
as blissews
wingstriving
to stretch
up
over
and beyond

these ethereal waves

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Copyright 2004 knightmirror
Published on Tuesday, September 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: extraodinary you two, intruiging the way words were combined...seemed to give them new senses...be proud guys, ethereal indeed. wordmelds, haha, i like that

  • knightmirror On Tuesday, September 28, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    doe....what can i say....you're magnificent...and the beauty you poured into this only made my smile blossom in the darkness...thank you so much for writing with me again....i am truly honored....*hugs and kisses*...much love,chris

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, September 28, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    chris..you give me more credit than I deserve..it was your talent, unique style and form that started this off..i simply followed where you led..thank 'you' for asking and indulging me once again. *hugs n' kisses* w/much love and respect, doe

  • knightmirror On Tuesday, September 28, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    one more thing...i don't wanna quote anything so i'll just say...i love your wordmelds...you did a fantastic job my dear....thank you again...this is definitely one of my favorites...much love,chris

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, September 28, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    Awww thanks *hides*...You, as always, make it seem effortless and I appreciate your patience with me in trying my hand at your style. I really enjoyed working with you on this. Thanks again hon :)

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