Blood, Honey, and Water

By MGood

I recall the lazy whisper
Like music
To manipulate my blue lust
Stop
Then shake my shadow
Sleep bitter winter moon
Rusting beauty
Under a black garden
Use me
I am not essential
What love
A mad purple sea
Boiling with me
Scream frantic moment
Flood my sky
Leave the void
I will drive you out
Above weakness
And death

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Published on Sunday, November 5, 2000. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Blood, Honey, and Water"

A former member wrote: Great! I love it!
A former member wrote: a beautiful mixture; the stop stills are imperative and create both control and chaos......demands and surrenders....exquisite work, luv. blessings on the new year~
On Sunday, September 24, 2006, Railway_Butterfly (353) wrote:

But I still love this. Even in these days when even inside happiness or excitement; other things are fading fast.. this still manages to cause sparks. Well done. Thank you. Please write more. I'm thirsty for people like you.
On Sunday, September 24, 2006, Railway_Butterfly (353) wrote:

My last comment on this piece absolutly sucked. I'm afraid I still haven't got anything better to say. I never seem to get better at this whole commeting thing.
On Saturday, March 25, 2006, monalisamarie (113) wrote:

oh my...this is so beautuful....
On Friday, February 25, 2005, Sticky Kitty (241) wrote:

a collection of words i see nicely done -kitty
On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Sin (1135) wrote:

this read so sleek and sensual in my head...i will have to thank Railway for suggesting this, wonderful write ~kristy
On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Savannah (218) wrote:

womderful... i like
On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, knightmirror (426) wrote:

i am in shock that this hasn't recieved more comments than this....there is only one thing to do to make sure this one gets noticed more...*faves*.....****-chris
On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, manywalks (747) wrote:

Yes, it should have gotten more thus far. Knight's comment made it catch my eye, and for that I'm gratefull, wouldn't want to misss this any longer than I have. ~ mw
On Sunday, October 24, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (353) wrote:

I love some of the images in this...but...I couldnt pick them out..the flow of this is so perfect,It alomst doesn't feel right to tear it apart...wonderful work...
On Sunday, October 24, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (353) wrote:

This feels,to me...Like real gothic poetry...it reminds me of the kind of stuff I used to read...the reason I loved this kind of poetry....im sorry...this is a really bad comment,ha
On Thursday, June 24, 2004, glasshouse (530) wrote:

I like this a lot. Seductive and provocative. Yet subtle and still. Great write. And may I say... you're positively beautiful, yourself. -Glass