what's so trivial?
By Taunting The Reaper
hold that whip swashbuckler
you're too judgmental
fried eyes at dawns early light
I've got something to tell you
we're all just passing through
you don't own the place
but seriously, splintered doors
cardboard covered windows
and the smell of stale dust clouds
do you really want this?
I'm onto something better
I've got a litigating bird outside my window
who apparently disagrees with my sleep
this bird sings so beautifully, I often wake just to listen
there's this friendly barber I over tip
when she tells me I'm handsome
maybe I was once
but when she says it with a straight face
I am once again
and just the other day I reached up
the way a drowning man reaches up
to help a short old lady get some cereal
at the supermarket
what's that you say?
"these are minor, little, trivial things
that are best left on the bottom shelf
for the rats to pick at when you're dead"
"no way" I say
I can dance my way across traffic
I can catch a secret whispering away
I've even been known to coax a budding rose
with a smile
but I never met a trivial moment
I didn't like
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Comments on "what's so trivial?"
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On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
wow....what in the ....this is a beautiful wordstreamed fragilecreation capable of shattering a black hole into the shell of a burnt-out star....then the end just sealed the thought....thank you for sharing this.....-knight
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On Sunday, January 22, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Better Way, you're a reporter of the human condition...for the Lost Souls Chronicle, possibly?...
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A former member wrote:
Sometime's it's the trivial moment's that are most precious. What a wonderful expression you have written!
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A former member wrote:
Lovely tribute to simplicity. It is often lost on people today and nice to know more appreciate the little things.