what's so trivial?

By Taunting The Reaper

hold that whip swashbuckler

you're too judgmental

fried eyes at dawns early light

I've got something to tell you

we're all just passing through

you don't own the place

but seriously, splintered doors

cardboard covered windows

and the smell of stale dust clouds

do you really want this?

 

I'm onto something better

I've got a litigating bird outside my window

who apparently disagrees with my sleep

this bird sings so beautifully, I often wake just to listen

there's this friendly barber I over tip

when she tells me I'm handsome

maybe I was  once

but when she says it with a straight face

I am once again

and just the other day I reached up

the way a drowning man reaches up

to help a short old lady get some cereal

at the supermarket

 

what's that you say?

"these are minor, little, trivial things

that are best left on the bottom shelf

for the rats to pick at when you're dead"

 

"no way" I say

I can dance my way across traffic

I can catch a secret whispering away

I've even been known to coax a budding rose

with a smile

but I never met a trivial moment

I didn't like

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Copyright 2012 A Better Way To Die
Published on Thursday, January 19, 2012.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • knightmirror On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    wow....what in the ....this is a beautiful wordstreamed fragilecreation capable of shattering a black hole into the shell of a burnt-out star....then the end just sealed the thought....thank you for sharing this.....-knight

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, January 22, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    Better Way, you're a reporter of the human condition...for the Lost Souls Chronicle, possibly?...

  • A former member wrote: Sometime's it's the trivial moment's that are most precious. What a wonderful expression you have written!

  • Magdalena On Friday, January 20, 2012, Magdalena (615)By person wrote:

    I like the message here. Nicely done.

  • A former member wrote: Lovely tribute to simplicity. It is often lost on people today and nice to know more appreciate the little things.


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