the moment (you were born for)
By FadedBlues
This happened
in 1967, in the army, in Georgia.
On Saturday nights, if I wasn't
on duty, I'd go
to the USO club in town, along with 100,
maybe
200 other guys
There was a girl there that everybody, I mean
everybody, wanted to dance with. She might
have been the only girl
in the room, maybe in
the whole world.
She was tall, short
brown hair, I think they called
it a pixie hairdo. She wore a mini-dress, the
kind that was just coming into fashion at
the time.
She
was as cute as............ Okay, think of
the cutest thing you can
think of...
Got it? She was cuter than that.
And her earrings;
a small wooden ball on a
string that dangled from each ear.
They
danced crazy when she danced. When the
music started, every
guy there tried to be
the first one to her chair.
I never,
ever, got a dance with her.
200 guys faster than me. So I'd sit
and watch her dance, and color in
my dream for the night.
Once during a dance, her earring fell off. She
took the other one
off and walked over to me.
To Me.....
I held out my hand, and
she placed the earrings
in my palm. After the dance, she came
over
and got them.
She didn't say a word...I didn't say a word.
That was it.
The moment I was born for.
Author's Note:
I'm sharing this with you...Awards
Comments on "the moment (you were born for)"
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On Tuesday, February 7, 2023, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
A different kind of silent romance - brief, fleeting yet filled with meaning. Love it.
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A former member wrote:
I love the way that you write and the poem was incredible.
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A former member wrote:
this was amazing one of those once in a life time moments very amazing! thanks so much for sharing it with us
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On Thursday, October 3, 2013, Leineco
(59) wrote:
What an absolutely gorgeous "singular moment in time" this poem is. The language is so accessible, the setting familiar enough to "click" with most of us...and the wistfulness palpable. Very nice write :-)
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On Thursday, June 6, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Wow, this was worth a revisit for sure. The smallest things for which we're born for. Amazing memory !! ~^_^~ I loved getting a glimpse into the past w/ you !!
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On Thursday, October 3, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
I saw it up for 'poem of the day'.... God I love this poem.... supreme greatness, she must have been quite the force... to inspire such an epic write.... :)~
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A former member wrote:
So sweet and sad the same time.
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On Monday, January 14, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
There is always one moment in time that stands out when everything else is forgotten... a touch, a kiss, a glance sent your way, softly spoken words in the throws of passion... everything comes together in that one moment and you realize that is what you were born for...
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On Saturday, November 17, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
very well written LOL too many times i have felt that way... not the main show, just content to watch
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A former member wrote:
goddess - strange how this species always have the sweet aura of mystery and a feeling of warmth about them.
mortal - so warm a feeling to learn how some still hold the power to respect and admire beauty so un-selfishly......
the poet - do i have to say the words?
the poem - shot through the heart.......
(the last line was a killer................. ..)
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2012, XXYYZZ
(12) wrote:
Love the way you capture everything so beautifully
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
So you were right, I absolutely loved this. I want to put how it made me feel into words but the adjectives I'm looking for keep evading me. Thanks for the suggestion, I enjoyed this so very much.
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On Thursday, February 16, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
SD, thanks for visiting. I'm so glad my hunch was right in this case...drop in any time...
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On Sunday, February 12, 2012, jodeanna
(41) wrote:
I hadn't realized that I was holding my breath until after the poem ended. This took my breath away. To adore another from afar.. There is nothing like it. You never got to dance with the girl but you got a small part of her which is more than enough. She trusted you, above anyone else in the room, with her earrings. Beautiful.
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On Monday, February 13, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
I'm glad you enjoyed this so much. that 1 magic moment in my life...that alone made it worth being born.
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On Thursday, January 5, 2012, Quietus
(75) wrote:
A very nice write. It's kind of romantic in a torturing and ironic way. Very sad you never got to dance with the girl...Thanks for sharing.
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On Thursday, January 5, 2012, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
Holy smokes! That's a whole lot of cute to be contained in one girl! It must of been a way for the universe to re-balance itself; make one girl super cute to save mankind! I loved this, thanks for sharing it.
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On Thursday, January 5, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Thanks, Buddy...I guess the army theme drew you here...she shattered my heart, but it was a pleasure...
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On Thursday, January 5, 2012, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
it would seem you gained the lady's trust... a lovely glimpse into your private reverie treasure store... a lot to reflect on in this... thank you for sharing it
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On Thursday, January 5, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
NikesRain, thanks...I was 19 & too immature to rationalize it, but it's still my most cherished memory...