Comments by Leineco
- "Thanks you so much BT…it is a great honor to have such an old posting read and commented on!!!"
Posted by Leineco on "Shelved" by Leineco
- "Horrific as it is. . .inescapably compelling! Despite my muscles cringing I simply could not stop.
And ,oh, the power of the "candy cane" imagery popping up.
Damn fine write FD!"
Posted by Leineco on "Candy Cane" by FearlessDragon
- "Ahhh. . .sex, drugs and rock 'n roll!
alone in cabana
third banana -
left to his own devices;
crystal blown ichor
surfs veins and surges
to the four four back beat
of guitars and drum skins.
Scintillatingly subversive! ;-)
"
Posted by Leineco on "Third Banana" by lupus tenebrae
- "LOL - love it :-)
But truth be told, it sounds more like inner dialog than what really went down. I know, cuz I've been there…and the perfect retort comes around as you sit a stew about how arrogant and rude it was - how what you'd really like to say was……………
I enjoyed this :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "Pretty Little Punk Girl" by stuart_pid
- "a powerful and compelling write! How cruel the slow blooming of insecurity - leaving you devastated. You built it remorselessly and I could feel the creep as it took control.
Not in any way to take away the power of the poem - just meaning to be helpful:
a couple typos -
re: "daily reminders of where your really are" (your shot be you) and plaque should be plague :-)
"
Posted by Leineco on "securing insecurity" by darkdesires
- "Thanks Peyton :-)
I'm a native New Yorker - but moved down here to the Carolinas in 1996. I am still constantly amazed to see churches pop up pretty much anywhere - and almost instantly gather a congregation! It's… I don't know… weird. LOL"
Posted by Leineco on "Rural Carolina" by Leineco
- "soul crushing poetry. . .such artistic ability to convey the unexplainable!
here I am six months later
still soaking wet and miserable. . .
if you think you're prepared -you aren't
when you think you'll be alright you won''t. . .
You'll remember old heartbreaks and wonder
how you ever thought that was pain
amazing writing!
and the knife to the heart
you'll dwell for months on what you didn't say -
and for years on what you did
truly heartfelt P O E T R Y.
"
Posted by Leineco on "On mothers dying." by Rachel
- "Impressively subtle. Although the loss of what was once perfect love is tragically spoken - the sudden quick-silver knife blade slice of the loss of a child slashes through the mind so quickly, the shock barely registers till 3 seconds later.
Very effective write!
"
Posted by Leineco on "Sentence" by Stranger
- "I have to say, this is one of the best I have read here in a long time. It is a very compelling read and held my attention fiercely throughout. Very nice work!
(And I thank you for your service in protecting me and my country)"
Posted by Leineco on "South on Route Detroit" by Michael
- "I caught this one using the "random selection" button.....what a present :-)
I was completely captured by the flow of both thought and writing. Broken hearts never do quite mend completely. I was particularly taken by this section:
and when you sleep, does the past haunt more deeply
than any nostalgic moment can muster
Very nicely done."
Posted by Leineco on "when ten is twelve." by Six-Out
- "Thank you for your encouragement :-)
...chasing the wind.....yeah, that's what it feels like :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "The Price" by Leineco
- "Thank you so much for your support :-) (I, too, remember yielding .... memory never lets go :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "The Price" by Leineco
- "What an absolutely gorgeous "singular moment in time" this poem is. The language is so accessible, the setting familiar enough to "click" with most of us...and the wistfulness palpable. Very nice write :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "the moment (you were born for)" by FadedBlues
[Next]
