Tonight I hold you with all that I am

By Armor for your life

Tonight,
Under the not so special moonlight.

I saw memories
Being boxed away
By those with anonymous names.

A final realization
That our time together is coming to an end.

~*~
I knew one day you would leave
But no clue of what it would do to me.
~*~

Tonight,
Under the not so special moonlight.

I embraced you
And held you tighter than
Atlas holds the world.

Your arms around my neck
(Face resting on my chest)

My arms around your waist
(Hands in the small of your back)

I buried my head in your shoulder
And cried out whatever was left
Of my already broken soul.

~*~
I swear
If there is anything left of me when you’re gone
I will gladly offer it to you.
~*~

Tonight,
Under the not so special moonlight.

I whispered words
I know you did not hear.

“You could be all I’ve ever needed,
You are all I’ve ever wanted,
And you make everything in my life
That much more important.”

~*~
Though I gasp for words
And though you have more than taken my breath away…
You make breathing that much easier.
~*~

Tonight,
Under the not so special moonlight.

I truly wonder
If you know how much I love you.

And I know
If we are meant to be
Our hearts will find each other again.

But I never perfected the art of patience.
That virtue,
I lack.

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© 2006 Armor for your life
Published on Thursday, December 14, 2006.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Amazing piece... Ive felt this same way not long ago... Write on....

  • Army Barbie On Thursday, April 10, 2008, Army Barbie (316)By person wrote:

    This right here is breathtaking love.

  • freudian-slip On Tuesday, April 8, 2008, freudian-slip (236)By person wrote:

    no way, ever could I have said it half this good.

  • A former member wrote: This was amazing. Structured perfectly, and yeah. The line about Atlas, well that was pure unadulterated genius. I loved this!

  • xserratedsoulx On Friday, January 18, 2008, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    i've been there. and i'm sorry you have been too.

  • Enigma On Sunday, December 16, 2007, Enigma (90)By person wrote:

    That was simply Amazing, nice work

  • Taunting The Reaper On Tuesday, November 27, 2007, Taunting The Reaper (169)By person wrote:

    Amazing, I had to read it twice before I could tell you that I had to read it twice. Exquisite.

  • Lynaes On Friday, November 2, 2007, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    "And though you have more than taken my breath away... you make breathing that much easier." Perfectly beautiful. This poem (especially that quoted line) will be stuck in my head for some time.

  • A former member wrote: Omg thats so beautiful.

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Friday, January 19, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (243)By person wrote:

    From the opening lines about memories being boxed away, I was completely drawn in. I can relate to this piece more than anyone could ever know. Your words have reached me and grabbed ahold.

  • A former member wrote: This got me pretty close to tears. Truly amazing.

  • Mylissa On Monday, December 18, 2006, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    Beautiful.

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, December 16, 2006, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    beautiful.....simply beautiful......

  • Alanarchy On Friday, December 15, 2006, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Soul dancer found my favorite line as well. Write on.

  • soul dancer On Thursday, December 14, 2006, soul dancer (95)By person wrote:

    You have a simple and wonderful way with words. Loved it. "I embraced you and held you tighter than Atlas holds the world"...beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: nice fuckin write... i loved every line of it... WOW

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, December 14, 2006, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    *succinct

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, December 14, 2006, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    And a BIG Welcome To DP!!

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, December 14, 2006, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    This was beautifully crafted, succint, and with a great ending. Write the hell on..

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