with black on gray
By Six-Out
you are.
thundercloud. operas
beating bass in troubled chords
like water filling cracks
just begging the salt
to set you free.
when ink pours from open wounds.
and your lips beat bad
better than forced rhyme without
a single shred of reason. and your arms
they're tidal waves.
almost. poetic
so I'd listen intently.
because the answer is always in the break.
and words are spraying in muffled colors.
something short of meeting
heart murmers.
with the intent of inviting a purpose.
while I watched your tongue
unwind in a way that was meant
for letters.
and your fingers were like charcoal.
when you left your mark
on everything you touched.
and I sat
and I drank
and I pretended that you would never
fall out of love.
with understanding- and searching
for the answer to every question
that your mind could create.
so there-
with your hands leaving spots of gray.
you looked tarnished.
something like. old folk tales
and hope.
so I stood before you
a broken man looking for someone to say
being a dreamer, man.
it ain't so bad.
but I'm steady walking train rails.
with arms outstretched- as if my bones were hollow.
and I could drink heartache
from darkened clouds.
with you-
and your fingers. painting the sky
with no purpose.
just presence.
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Comments on "with black on gray"
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A former member wrote:
"when ink pours from open wounds". Wicked. Keep up with the poignancy! Little phrases like that made it.
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On Wednesday, December 25, 2013, lovechild
(43) wrote:
I am feeling the weight of these words on a soul that has been in exile, mundane patterns and routine moves fill my days and I miss poems. You have given this to us as a single reason to believe in the old dream, the hope for something beyond what is seen.
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Well written piece here Jon, lol oh ya I know who you are now Mr. I had fun reading this piece while taking it the beauty it entailed, great write and thank you for sharing =)
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully visual ... your style magnificent
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On Monday, September 7, 2009, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
magnificent. that conclusion: boom.
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A former member wrote:
I love this Six... well done
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On Friday, July 24, 2009, Mari
(419) wrote:
I liked the last stanza. It stuck with me, it's so beautiful.
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On Sunday, July 19, 2009, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i read this when it was first posted and remember thinking, how fortunate i was to be able to read such a great poem that morning but that i didnt know how to comment, so i left it silent and thankful and just thought that i should comment as i came back to read this today and loved it just as much
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A former member wrote:
Oh Jon...I wish just for a day everything could be as lovely and sad as your words. Then our pain wouldn't be so ugly and we could pretend we'd learned something from our hurts
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On Sunday, July 5, 2009, FallenSky
(42) wrote:
I can't find words enough to praise this, its so somber and grey, and i gotta agree with Mars about the traintrack, arms outstretched picture, thats gonna stick with me all day. Great Stuff.
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On Friday, July 3, 2009, Sin
(1135) wrote:
your poetry should come with a warning label ::warning:: this will break your heart and make you want to hug Jon. i wish your grey skies would give way to blue and im sorry i find this sorrow beautiful ~k