with black on gray

By Six-Out




you are.
thundercloud. operas
beating bass in troubled chords
like water filling cracks
just begging the salt
to set you free.

when ink pours from open wounds.
and your lips beat bad
better than forced rhyme without
a single shred of reason. and your arms
they're tidal waves.
almost. poetic
so I'd listen intently.
because the answer is always in the break.
and words are spraying in muffled colors.
something short of meeting
heart murmers.
with the intent of inviting a purpose.
while I watched your tongue
unwind in a way that was meant
for letters.


and your fingers were like charcoal.
when you left your mark
on everything you touched.
and I sat
and I drank
and I pretended that you would never
fall out of love.
with understanding- and searching
for the answer to every question
that your mind could create.
so there-
with your hands leaving spots of gray.
you looked tarnished.
something like. old folk tales

and hope.

so I stood before you
a broken man looking for someone to say
being a dreamer, man.
it ain't so bad.
but I'm steady walking train rails.
with arms outstretched- as if my bones were hollow.
and I could drink heartache
from darkened clouds.
with you-

and your fingers. painting the sky
with no purpose.
just presence.

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© 2009 Jon Rodgers
Published on Wednesday, July 1, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "when ink pours from open wounds". Wicked. Keep up with the poignancy! Little phrases like that made it.

  • lovechild On Wednesday, December 25, 2013, lovechild (43)By person wrote:

    I am feeling the weight of these words on a soul that has been in exile, mundane patterns and routine moves fill my days and I miss poems. You have given this to us as a single reason to believe in the old dream, the hope for something beyond what is seen.

  • Gray Vision On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Well written piece here Jon, lol oh ya I know who you are now Mr. I had fun reading this piece while taking it the beauty it entailed, great write and thank you for sharing =)

  • A former member wrote: Beautifully visual ... your style magnificent

  • purr_verse On Monday, September 7, 2009, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    magnificent. that conclusion: boom.

  • A former member wrote: I love this Six... well done

  • Mari On Friday, July 24, 2009, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    I liked the last stanza. It stuck with me, it's so beautiful.

  • Anth On Sunday, July 19, 2009, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    i read this when it was first posted and remember thinking, how fortunate i was to be able to read such a great poem that morning but that i didnt know how to comment, so i left it silent and thankful and just thought that i should comment as i came back to read this today and loved it just as much

  • A former member wrote: Oh Jon...I wish just for a day everything could be as lovely and sad as your words. Then our pain wouldn't be so ugly and we could pretend we'd learned something from our hurts

  • FallenSky On Sunday, July 5, 2009, FallenSky (42)By person wrote:

    I can't find words enough to praise this, its so somber and grey, and i gotta agree with Mars about the traintrack, arms outstretched picture, thats gonna stick with me all day. Great Stuff.

  • A former member wrote: ...

  • Sin On Friday, July 3, 2009, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    your poetry should come with a warning label ::warning:: this will break your heart and make you want to hug Jon. i wish your grey skies would give way to blue and im sorry i find this sorrow beautiful ~k


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