Comments by Gray Vision
- "Wow such a journey in this piece the imagery portrayed here is amazing. I caught a typo on line 5 I believe, "kowing (to knowing) the darkness I bring." Other than that good stuff and thank you for sharing."
Posted by Gray Vision on "...Trench Coat Sorrows" by SolApathy
- "Of course and I’m happy you appreciate it, btw you will always be MD to me, there’s nothing quite like the original you know. Anyhow, thank you very much for checking it out (:"
Posted by Gray Vision on "A Mother's Touch" by Gray Vision
- "I've lost two friends to many to suicide so much so that I had to write on it too. It's been a long time since I've had a work take my mind back to that point in time, when what you expressed here felt fresh. Anyhow thank you for the share and take care of yourself."
Posted by Gray Vision on "Suicide" by LunaFlower
- "A piece definitely born from a place of hurt, I'm sorry for your loss. We're here for you though, stay strong my friend and thank you for sharing"
Posted by Gray Vision on "grandpa" by Nemo
- "This was awesome, they say the scariest individuals are the seemingly weak, quiet ones and it's true. We don't know the horrors that lurks in the minds of these individuals but every now and then, they share a glimpse of it with an unfortunate soul. Great write, keep up the spectacular work(:
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Posted by Gray Vision on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave
- "This reminds me of when I first moved to the states, back home we don't have titles such as jocks, goths etc everyone hangs out together at school at lunch where as here in the states the cafeteria is divided into sub groups. I knew nothing about this and so I hung out and got along with everyone it didn't matter what group it was. Just goes to show you don't have to conform to anyone particular group etc. I've always done my own thing and it's because of this that I am the person I am today. Thanks for re-posting this it is much appreciated."
Posted by Gray Vision on "Mechanicophobia" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "This write is very mind boggling, I had to read this a couple times and will most likely read it again here and there to see what more I can get out of it. I don't play cards much but now as I truly think about it, it does make sense one side of either is shown and the flip is merely a reflection of the same side. Like you mention the queen can move anywhere she wants but stays put, this made me think of movies like Gladiator and Troy where the kings as well as their pawns come and go and the queens remains. Aside from another fact that by majority women out live men there's so much that can be said about this piece, well done and thank you for sharing."
Posted by Gray Vision on "The Red Queen and The Suicide King" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "I can totally relate given that alot of my works are on the lighter side. Despite all else it's fine here besides this place needs some light from time to time so knowing that I'm not alone in that sense is just as inspiring for me. Thank you so much for sharing and take care."
Posted by Gray Vision on "Tucked Away" by bluehoney19
- "What happened to him? I'm so sorry you had to go through this, I've never experienced anything like this but i'm sure I will in time, one of life's many certainties. I hope you're coming around alright, take care of yourself and thank you for sharing."
Posted by Gray Vision on "I love you, man." by devilsrighthand
- "You're far to kind Carmen, but you're already so well off on here I'm not sure if you'll need to. Thank you very much for dropping by though and keep up the good work on your end =) "
Posted by Gray Vision on "Used" by Gray Vision
- "Of course dwells heh, thank you very much. When's your birthday I could write you one too you know, alright take care till next time =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Jaded's Birthday" by Gray Vision
- "Ya I remember our talks, he always gave good advise. He always looked out for my well being and would mail me to check up on me when I've been off for some time, I miss that and I miss him. This was a very nice tribute Wolfy, thank you for sharing this with us here on DP, take care my friend =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Farewell...and Stay Safe" by lupus tenebrae
- "Hey I think you tried to message me on my, I bearly caught it was responding to a couple comments as well aand posting my thoughts on some, sorry. Anyhow thought I'd drop by and pay you a visit, and look where I ended up. You captured this environment to the T, it's like a party/bar type deal, smoke filled room was probably the most visual line for me among other things, well done Kya I enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much for sharing, I'm gonna go poem hopping hehe to see what else you've written, thanks again =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "diva in a bottle" by Malice In Wonderland
- "I find myself here yet again to reminisce, on the days of wolfy when my bleddy whistle worked and later on when the tumbleweeds rolled in. I remember those days, when writers block wasn't in my vocabulary. This padded room reminds me of back then, I hope all is well my friend. Ill be seeing you around, take care till then =) "
Posted by Gray Vision on "Padded Room" by lupus tenebrae
- "This is truly remarkable, and you say none of your works are good? You know what, all of our styles are unique my dear and you're no exception, besides that's the beauty of poetry, we all portray it differently. Keep up the great work, cause I need to read some more. Thank you for sharing and take care =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium
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