to wander
By Jonas
i saw a small clear waterfall
pouring down over dark rocks
with little tufts of dark
green moss here and there
in the foregroud
set a little to the right
were the exposed roots of a conifer
shooting down
and out of the broken, loamy ground
to a spot about five feet
below the tree
and in between here and there
the roots trace this beautifully
random pattern
into the empty space
and the place felt so
serene
that i stopped and drank it in
for a moment
and i walked on
now i scrape the deep redish brown
curls of skin
off of manzanita trees
the little twists of
bark come off easily
just a little touch from one
of my fingers and it flies off
and down
floating to the ground
i slide my finger down a
smooth bough
and a hundred little red flakes
fly all around
and down
and i smile
a little bit
and i have never
felt
more alone
Comments on "to wander"
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
lovely; beautiful imagery in a thoughtful and quietly direct write... wonderful as always.
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On Sunday, October 10, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Beauty can be found in such simple places and ways...and the beauty like you describe, that I have only ever observed when alone, does at the same time for me seem to reveal
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On Sunday, October 10, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
loneliness...because it whispers to me that we are always, at the essence of our existence, alone... The same people I wish could be there to share
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On Sunday, October 10, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
the simple beauty with...would be the ones that would, in fact, prevent me from discovering it in the first place by their presence... I enjoyed this very much.
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On Saturday, October 9, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
this is an exraorfinary write full of a content emotion i sense....thanks for sharing...i truly enjoyed...****-knight
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On Saturday, October 9, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
extraordinary.....i meant...but you get the just of it
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A former member wrote:
wow...you possess a great sorcery in your words my freind that let you convey them...STRAIGHT to imagry.....very very VERY well written..my hat goes off to you ~ME-UC~
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On Thursday, September 23, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
it seems that nature has brought you solace......often it is alone when we find solace.......a pillar of inner strenth.........well done my friend fish.........urban
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was really picturesque and serene.. but the depths of loneliness really cut through.. brilliant as always!
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
you know... this doesn't seem, to me, like you're bothered by being alone. sometimes, nature is the best company. it always listens and never offers silly advice.
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, Rachel
(210) wrote:
I feel you on this one, man. I really do. *sighs* Being alone is the toughest part. Then you get to that place where you think you'll always be alone...