Path to Tranquility
By Lord Kalgalath
path to tranquility,
littered with the slow healing wounds
of many an ancient battle
and the scars of those more ancient
full of branches and forks
myriad decisions for your weary mind
day after day, endlessly
as the brambles reach to rend thy flesh
lay wound upon wound
till you've cut to the core
scars upon scars upon scars
so old we dont remember thier cause
wandering on in a haze of pain
and bittersweet memory
countless paths, branching endlessly
each the same, leading to another like itself
dark paths, light paths
paths choked with wild growth
paths that lie clear and straight
but i only seek one path, one way
its clear and bright, this path i seek
far too long have it walked dark paths
seeing them with twisted vision to be bright
my vision is so clear now though
I stagger weary and wounded, searching
but all paths seem so dark, and so alone
none are my path, none the one that I desire
so onward I go looking, though I begin to fear
that I shall never
find my path
to Tranquility
Awards
Comments on "Path to Tranquility"
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A former member wrote:
Oh, this is so beautiful. Amazing pen. 10
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
your writing is NOT mediocre. it is amazing. something about it...i cannot pull myself away.
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this was spectacular!!~lay wound upon wound till you've cut to the core~ we all become lost at some point, have faith and in the end the path will become clear ~kristy
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
I think we all start to fear that at some point, but if we can find someone that will stay by us we'll find our path
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On Wednesday, November 17, 2004, Sex Slave
(78) wrote:
aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwww!!!!!! your so sweet, Kya's lucky to have someone like you that cares so much about her. D:Danny
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On Monday, November 8, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
"littered with the slow healing wounds of many an ancient battle" I cant say much more than Nike except to agree with her. You have done something exceptional with this piece and I feel like I know you a little better. Great piece. -Glass
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On Monday, November 8, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
so bittersweet and painful, remeniscent and aching. Like knowing the exit exists yet fearful the map is too old and the terrain changed once again. wonderfully done.
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On Tuesday, October 26, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
*hugs you close and kisses your forehead* Don't give up, I like this. You have talent and you've got ears willing to listen. btw Devy, you're uber sexy ^_~
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On Monday, October 25, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was painful.. completely captivating.. i could feel the darkness...and bitterness behind your words.. wonderful work!
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A former member wrote:
..wow...very good..i enjoyed this..im hoping the rest of your works are as good as this one..keep it up ~ME-UC~
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On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
*wipes a tear* I'm so sorry sweetheart....I dunno what to say*holds you close* ~L Kya
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On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, Dommi
(95) wrote:
*starts laying some bricks* give me a good ten years and it'll be done.. heh.. on a more serious note, if there's anything I can do to cheer you up, well, I'd cheer the hell out of you. Just let me know. :)
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On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
a long and dreary path it is my friend.............your words have never been so true........well done...........urban
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A former member wrote:
i'm with knight, i feel like this also man, superb depiction of the lost hopelessness, apart from the odd grammatical mistake this is flawless, a big well done man.
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On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
i had to log back into comment on this....but this is so amazing i can't really say anything so i'll just add it to my faves...i feel like this right now though....****-knight