A Razor's Kiss

By Deadly Embrace

The blood trickles down my flesh,
Dripping along the floor,
The swift brisk of a blade,
I've become to gladly endure,
Streeks of pain,
Marking these white walls,
Draws me forth to deaths
Sweet charm,
And no one's around to see
Me fall..
Only unopened arms,
Falling into bitter solitude,
Escaping by the rush of my blade,
Ripping and tearing at what you've
Left me with,
As my blood drips along this page,
Spilling out what I could never say,
I press the blade upon my flesh,
A sad attempt I must conclude,
But it's hard,
When it's all you have left,
When will this madness cease?
From the scars that I, myself
Have made,
For I can not bare such lonliness,
When my love lies within
A simple little razorblade..

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Copyright 2004 Deadly Embrace
Published on Saturday, July 10, 2004.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i loved this piece, it was truly amazing how well i could relate to this...great write!

  • DarkWolf On Monday, August 30, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Another amazing work. I love the subject and the way you write. Wow. It touched that dark part inside me that shares a similar love. Beautiful -Michael

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful piece...Its scary but your words make it so good....and the pain and sadness is there...nice work

  • Lord Kalgalath On Saturday, July 24, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    excellent write..well captured.

  • A former member wrote: it's so sad when i see these type of poems...such emotion..or lack there of from a cold world...i loved the way you put your words together using what's left of your heart...beautiful write

  • Beautiful Scars On Saturday, July 10, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    I like it, despite what others may think of cutter poems..You have a unique way of geting your feelings across. ..::Fairy::...

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