Comm.union. (with the lovely Start Over )
By Malice In Wonderland
simply breathtaking
rain dancing within rain
microscopic eternities
reflecting autumns
animadversions
taking breaths gently
rain within standing rain
infinite fleece gyroscopic
autumns reflecting
versionsanimal
bouncing off filtered sunlight sonnets
clouds co-mingleing in curious emapthy
curling around questioning currents
of starbound
eternaties
like an activity from a cut-out book
we connect the dots tipping the scale
where Orion's belt is the fulcrum
answering morse-coded ebony dialects
vibrating on ivory tusks gathering grace
in gemstone
gardens
lily crowned
intaglio eyes
in faded blues
crawling through the grass like ivy
tumbling past lily pad pondwaters
lady of the lake
in company
seaweed and cigarettes ....
ticklish reservations
holding dogeared memories
amongst second-hand stories
swaying through thoughts like pinwheels
ambushed by tomorrows breeze
from all angles pin-pointing degrees
of seperation from selfless
babbling leading
wishes and time left watching
ticking the hours away
blown away in the winds
of trepidation
always seeking
wandering
pulled through the tepid sands of time
slipping through the hourglass
where we settle back into
what we once were.
we were once the mountains
hovering above waterlogged forget-me-nots
remembering what an hour once was
rhythmically tapping beneath caverns
of fissured statues that crumbled
long before our eyes refocused
on what is truly important
us
Author's Note:
so fun to write this, thanks much :DComments on "Comm.union. (with the lovely Start Over )"
-
On Tuesday, March 19, 2013, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
Kya... thank you so much for writing this with me... it was truly a pleasure... you have truly blossomed as a poet... I've had the pleasure of watching you grow... once again thank you for taking this journey with me... much love and respect...-chris
-
On Tuesday, March 19, 2013, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
pleasure was all mine
-
On Wednesday, December 12, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
awesome collab! it flows so smoothly together
-
On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...many magical phrases in this, a pleasant diversion from the hassles of society...
-
On Monday, December 3, 2012, haunted
(837) wrote:
this is just loaded with lots of visuals, and the way its put together is a work of art. this is absolutely fantastic rain! loved it, awesome write.
-
On Monday, December 3, 2012, haunted
(837) wrote:
oh crap, i just realized this was a collab! sorry about that start over and rain...you two did very well together, i hardly noticed. great job guys!
-
A former member wrote:
*dissipates then blossoms from a mist of respect shown from behind 4 or 5 curtain calls*....it was an absolute honor blending pens with you....you are an excellently wonderful mind to create with and not only did we accent one another well...but we pushed one another further than we would have pushed oneself if it was a solo mission...thank you for this experience together...we'll have to do it again ...for serious....-s_o
-
On Thursday, December 6, 2012, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
you're such a talented and beautiful writer, thanks so much for this....