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Moisture
By Ravenblade
Midnight glistens, dew shimmers from breath
The stars glow, and tears stir the rain.
The petty beauty that we miss
just because we're sad or
ALONE.
Things like radiating moons,
eyeless stars, crying.
The misty clouds about, scattered and scarce
and condensation gathering on grass
dropping beads on the roses
sending down a naturous sensation.
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Copyright 2003 Ravenblade
Published on Friday, July 11, 2003.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Moisture"
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A former member wrote:
This poem was perfected, I can feel it. Reminded me of being angry and taking a walk and trying to calm down and then just breaking down and crying and feeling sorry for myself, walking home, telling the clouds and sunset and stars thank you for being the "only" beautiful thing in my life. Well done.
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On Friday, April 18, 2008, BethanyBallet
(21)
wrote:
Wow This is so beautiful.. thanks for sharing
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On Sunday, January 9, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
this renders me damn near speechless, Brian...the imagery is just...wow.VERY nice...
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On Tuesday, September 7, 2004, Dommi
(96) wrote:
I can't believe I haven't commented on this.. how did it slip right under my eyes? It was beautiful... Gawds... I can't get enough of you.
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On Friday, August 13, 2004, Rachel
(213) wrote:
"The stars glow, and tears stir the rain." Such vibrant detail.. It's so gentle, yet it slaps you in the face. This is amazing.
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On Tuesday, July 29, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
i love poetry that ends like this one does... so matter of fact, like the rose you forgot to sniff... like the lips your courage forbade you to kiss like so much that is unknown but apparent
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