thrust

By edenscancer

Its not about sex, its about power
the slow lead into explosive murder
the sensual sachrine mindblowing

god crushing... fuck

Its not about making love ... It's about taking love
about endless passion staring back at you because
they're so crushed and broken by the impact of the insatiated demon
this engraving on their soul
this thing that caters only to their sex
this fuck
this whore, this monster, this love...

It's not about motion, It's about rythym
the precision beat of adrenaline lust rush
the cataclysmic barrage of bare bodied bodies
slamming their truth into eachothers lies
cleaning the sin

its not about religion, it's about jesus christ
It's about making her forget his name

It's not about rape, it's about her having no choice

its about being inside to erase the begging sick in your head
erasing the scribbles of society enforced media suicide
with every thrust and push and break and bleed
It's not about insatiable want, It's about insanitys need

It's not about cumming, it's about being inside
it's about the walls giving in around you
because they can't handle the raucious ravage ride
Its' about god fuck jesus christ heroine super suicide
and about not caring if you live through it
as long as you cross to the other side

It's about the crash, and the burn
about fucking so hard it hurts
about becoming one
about being one

it's not about me, or you
it's about creating one
from destroying two




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Published on Sunday, April 9, 2006.     Filed under: "Adult" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: COME BACK.

  • Ravenblade On Tuesday, April 2, 2013, Ravenblade (327)By person wrote:

    what more can I add to this other than this has to be one of the most raw, and accurate depiction of an act with so many shades....I wish all poetry could live up to this level for my sake of reading...but I myself would never be able to post...well done is by far an understatement, but the best I can offer

  • GraveFlower On Sunday, October 21, 2012, GraveFlower (283)By person wrote:

    about becoming one.

  • Dei On Friday, September 9, 2011, Dei (703)By person wrote:

    i wanted to come visit this again. it still crushes me. So sexy, and intense. i miss you! youve been gone too long!

  • Devilish On Monday, May 23, 2011, Devilish (3782)By person wrote:

    It's about creating one for destroying two... Beautiful... Fuck so hard it hurts... I love it!!! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: That was amazing, I hope to one day write something half as good. It took my breath away Scholar

  • Dei On Wednesday, April 7, 2010, Dei (703)By person wrote:

    i was going through my bookmarks and i forgot how brilliant this was. After reading it a hundred times over the years since you wrote it.. it still makes me sick with wanting. And the ending rips my breath away and leaves me aching for a ciggarette

  • A former member wrote: very intense , loved it ! thanks for the read :)

  • Mylissa On Monday, June 1, 2009, Mylissa (853)By person wrote:

    yes

  • A former member wrote: Amazing... The images, the STRENGTH of this work is amazing. I loved the last stanza... And I really needed to hear an out of ordinary voice like yours today =) Thank you so so much!

  • technicolour-girl On Thursday, November 6, 2008, technicolour-girl (22)By person wrote:

    It's brilliant, enough said.

  • xserratedsoulx On Thursday, January 17, 2008, xserratedsoulx (214)By person wrote:

    LOVE the last stanza.

  • Niemand On Thursday, November 8, 2007, Niemand (366)By person wrote:

    Holy fuck! Fan-fucking-tastic! Amazing Explicit write.-Airi

  • Mari On Thursday, October 18, 2007, Mari (427)By person wrote:

    so that means. i'm touched? or something gay like that. but i CAN'T get ths out of my mind. and i should know. i've been trying for months.

  • Mari On Thursday, October 18, 2007, Mari (427)By person wrote:

    fucking. and here i am again. whatever you want to call it, this this has a huge impact on me. and right now it's the only thing i'm thinking about. i remember this and think of it sometimes even tho i read this a long time ago.

  • Sin On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Sin (1179)By person wrote:

    God damn! this was fucking fabulous! the words pulsed right off the page and so many killer lines i couldnt quote one if i tried..i wish i had room on my favorites for this *tips hat* ~kristy

  • Mari On Saturday, January 27, 2007, Mari (427)By person wrote:

    holy fucking shit. this is amazing and i know exactly what your talking about..well from the other end anyway. and i was going to say something else but i restrained myself. good-day sir.

  • Army Barbie On Thursday, November 16, 2006, Army Barbie (324)By person wrote:

    Holy shit this is sexy...as I'm eating my crackers and drinking an eggnogg milk shake. I feel compelled to hit the bed and take someone with me though, love it.

  • Mylissa On Tuesday, November 14, 2006, Mylissa (853)By person wrote:

    I have commented on this piece and you are right I DO LOVE it...your words are so passionate.

  • virginalnympho On Friday, June 16, 2006, virginalnympho (19)By person wrote:

    amazing. i think i fell in love with every word... and i don't even believe in love...

  • flying_fox On Friday, June 16, 2006, flying_fox (596)By person wrote:

    a great write... the malevolence behind the words is rivetting, I particularly liked 'it's not about religion, it's about Jesus Christ, it's about making her forget his name'. Awesome lines.

  • Cattarax On Friday, June 16, 2006, Cattarax (213)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much ... I think I need to go play with myself now ... and refer you to read touch me ( on my page ) .. to make you do the same thing

  • A former member wrote: wow! I am in awe of your obvius talent in this piece. I love this!

  • Dissolving Poet On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    holy fuck I'm never going to be the same after reading this, this is just life altering.

  • Kinkypoptart On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Kinkypoptart (578)By person wrote:

    wow... *leaves to take a shower* Great write ~*~Tart~*~

  • Dissolving Poet On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    *shivers* this was just incredible and damnable hehe* I need a cold shower* this was just over powering and made you just well... go crazy

  • BrokenButterflyWings On Saturday, April 22, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (33)By person wrote:

    you know its hot and I love it =) So much more to say about it, but I will leave it with: I especially like the sweet part at the end...

  • Vicious Pixie On Monday, April 10, 2006, Vicious Pixie (62)By person wrote:

    ...it's not about me, or you it's about creating one from destroying two... violent, passionate,raw...this makes me want to stop breathing

  • A former member wrote: ..read as if collapsing mind-stems to mouth, a deafening crash.. bit my tongue and held it as a whispered retort to screams in my head. fiercely penned.

  • Muse On Monday, April 10, 2006, Muse (58)By person wrote:

    ohmy im madly in love. *faves*

  • Mylissa On Monday, April 10, 2006, Mylissa (853)By person wrote:

    Simply beautiful! A insane masterpiece...I think we shall call it beautifully insane...

  • mozarts cat On Sunday, April 9, 2006, mozarts cat (184)By person wrote:

    completely speechless .. you have a brilliant way of conveying things .. 'it's not about making love ... it's about taking love' .. brilliant line =)

  • A former member wrote: this was fucking amazing, I am in love with this poem, this was a roller coaster and the thrust was powerful- I admire ur talent and the guts to bare naked the hunger within...excellent!! ~sinful~

  • edenscancer On Sunday, April 9, 2006, edenscancer (33)By person wrote:

    thanks for the comments!

  • elisa On Sunday, April 9, 2006, elisa (1639)By person wrote:

    pounding consciousness into oblivion........ fucking even the dust into nothing...... then swallowing the nothing into 'never' ............a cherry of a title, btw

  • A former member wrote: it's not about making love, it's about taking love.... I'm looking for more BRING IT ON gina

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