thrust

By edenscancer

Its not about sex, its about power
the slow lead into explosive murder
the sensual sachrine mindblowing

god crushing... fuck

Its not about making love ... It's about taking love
about endless passion staring back at you because
they're so crushed and broken by the impact of the insatiated demon
this engraving on their soul
this thing that caters only to their sex
this fuck
this whore, this monster, this love...

It's not about motion, It's about rythym
the precision beat of adrenaline lust rush
the cataclysmic barrage of bare bodied bodies
slamming their truth into eachothers lies
cleaning the sin

its not about religion, it's about jesus christ
It's about making her forget his name

It's not about rape, it's about her having no choice

its about being inside to erase the begging sick in your head
erasing the scribbles of society enforced media suicide
with every thrust and push and break and bleed
It's not about insatiable want, It's about insanitys need

It's not about cumming, it's about being inside
it's about the walls giving in around you
because they can't handle the raucious ravage ride
Its' about god fuck jesus christ heroine super suicide
and about not caring if you live through it
as long as you cross to the other side

It's about the crash, and the burn
about fucking so hard it hurts
about becoming one
about being one

it's not about me, or you
it's about creating one
from destroying two

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Published on Sunday, April 9, 2006. Filed under: "Adult" and "Poetry"

Comments on "thrust"

A former member wrote: COME BACK.
On Tuesday, April 2, 2013, Ravenblade (307) wrote:

what more can I add to this other than this has to be one of the most raw, and accurate depiction of an act with so many shades....I wish all poetry could live up to this level for my sake of reading...but I myself would never be able to post...well done is by far an understatement, but the best I can offer
On Sunday, October 21, 2012, GraveFlower (240) wrote:

about becoming one.
On Friday, September 9, 2011, Dei (663) wrote:

i wanted to come visit this again. it still crushes me. So sexy, and intense. i miss you! youve been gone too long!
On Monday, May 23, 2011, Devilish (2633) wrote:

It's about creating one for destroying two... Beautiful... Fuck so hard it hurts... I love it!!!
A former member wrote: That was amazing, I hope to one day write something half as good. It took my breath away
On Wednesday, April 7, 2010, Dei (663) wrote:

i was going through my bookmarks and i forgot how brilliant this was. After reading it a hundred times over the years since you wrote it.. it still makes me sick with wanting. And the ending rips my breath away and leaves me aching for a ciggarette
A former member wrote: very intense , loved it ! thanks for the read :)
On Monday, June 1, 2009, Mylissa (825) wrote:

yes
A former member wrote: Amazing... The images, the STRENGTH of this work is amazing. I loved the last stanza... And I really needed to hear an out of ordinary voice like yours today =) Thank you so so much!
On Thursday, November 6, 2008, technicolour-girl (21) wrote:

It's brilliant, enough said.
On Thursday, January 17, 2008, xserratedsoulx (212) wrote:

LOVE the last stanza.
On Thursday, November 8, 2007, Niemand (355) wrote:

Holy fuck! Fan-fucking-tastic! Amazing Explicit write.-Airi
On Thursday, October 18, 2007, Mari (419) wrote:

so that means. i'm touched? or something gay like that. but i CAN'T get ths out of my mind. and i should know. i've been trying for months.
On Thursday, October 18, 2007, Mari (419) wrote:

fucking. and here i am again. whatever you want to call it, this this has a huge impact on me. and right now it's the only thing i'm thinking about. i remember this and think of it sometimes even tho i read this a long time ago.
On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Sin (1135) wrote:

God damn! this was fucking fabulous! the words pulsed right off the page and so many killer lines i couldnt quote one if i tried..i wish i had room on my favorites for this *tips hat* ~kristy
On Saturday, January 27, 2007, Mari (419) wrote:

holy fucking shit. this is amazing and i know exactly what your talking about..well from the other end anyway. and i was going to say something else but i restrained myself. good-day sir.
On Thursday, November 16, 2006, Army Barbie (316) wrote:

Holy shit this is sexy...as I'm eating my crackers and drinking an eggnogg milk shake. I feel compelled to hit the bed and take someone with me though, love it.
On Tuesday, November 14, 2006, Mylissa (825) wrote:

I have commented on this piece and you are right I DO LOVE it...your words are so passionate.
On Friday, June 16, 2006, virginalnympho (19) wrote:

amazing. i think i fell in love with every word... and i don't even believe in love...
On Friday, June 16, 2006, flying_fox (571) wrote:

a great write... the malevolence behind the words is rivetting, I particularly liked 'it's not about religion, it's about Jesus Christ, it's about making her forget his name'. Awesome lines.
On Friday, June 16, 2006, Cattarax (210) wrote:

Thank you so much ... I think I need to go play with myself now ... and refer you to read touch me ( on my page ) .. to make you do the same thing
A former member wrote: wow! I am in awe of your obvius talent in this piece. I love this!
On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

holy fuck I'm never going to be the same after reading this, this is just life altering.
On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Kinkypoptart (555) wrote:

wow... *leaves to take a shower* Great write ~*~Tart~*~
On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

*shivers* this was just incredible and damnable hehe* I need a cold shower* this was just over powering and made you just well... go crazy
On Saturday, April 22, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (33) wrote:

you know its hot and I love it =) So much more to say about it, but I will leave it with: I especially like the sweet part at the end...
On Monday, April 10, 2006, Vicious Pixie (58) wrote:

...it's not about me, or you it's about creating one from destroying two... violent, passionate,raw...this makes me want to stop breathing
A former member wrote: ..read as if collapsing mind-stems to mouth, a deafening crash.. bit my tongue and held it as a whispered retort to screams in my head. fiercely penned.
On Monday, April 10, 2006, Muse (57) wrote:

ohmy im madly in love. *faves*
On Monday, April 10, 2006, Mylissa (825) wrote:

Simply beautiful! A insane masterpiece...I think we shall call it beautifully insane...
On Sunday, April 9, 2006, mozarts cat (183) wrote:

completely speechless .. you have a brilliant way of conveying things .. 'it's not about making love ... it's about taking love' .. brilliant line =)
A former member wrote: this was fucking amazing, I am in love with this poem, this was a roller coaster and the thrust was powerful- I admire ur talent and the guts to bare naked the hunger within...excellent!! ~sinful~
On Sunday, April 9, 2006, edenscancer (31) wrote:

thanks for the comments!
On Sunday, April 9, 2006, elisa (1595) wrote:

pounding consciousness into oblivion........ fucking even the dust into nothing...... then swallowing the nothing into 'never' ............a cherry of a title, btw
A former member wrote: it's not about making love, it's about taking love.... I'm looking for more BRING IT ON gina