This [D]esire o[f] [L]o[V]e

By diavolessa

Secrets wrapped inside
The sensual night

Inside a thousands desires that speak of love
They dance sinuously, softly, fast, uncontrollably
It’s magic
For the broken hears of luminescent minds
I search your heartbeat and I come closer

This feeling that beats so fast
Inside two broken wings
Like time beats every hour
It fulfills my love with you.

This desire of love
Grows to our crossing eyes
It’s heaven without labels
It’s just a wonderful love story

It grows and grows
Between two souls in quest
It’s a wild desire of adore
Without boundaries, pauses, causes, limits


Just you and me…

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Copyright 2003 diavolessa
Published on Friday, June 20, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Ravenblade On Wednesday, February 20, 2013, Ravenblade (313)By person wrote:

    I can still read this and feel exactly the same as I did nearly a decade ago...I just want it to continue...

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful and captivating!

  • italianbella On Monday, January 28, 2008, italianbella (185)By person wrote:

    beautifully written

  • Ravenblade On Sunday, October 10, 2004, Ravenblade (313)By person wrote:

    I think I've found a new addiction in your writing, I read and I don't ever want the poem to end...amazing write...>Raven

  • A former member wrote: WOW...*awe struck*

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, July 24, 2003, urbanhumility (1173)By person wrote:

    your words,written, seem always ancient and timeless, at the same time lucid and dreamlike. well written well said........urban

  • maddin foxxxy On Tuesday, June 24, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    "Without boundaries, pauses, causes, limits"...i could live through this thought...i guess it must be simple for it to be true..nicely done.

  • Midnight Phoenix On Monday, June 23, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    Only a dreamer could write something of this nature. It's good to know there are others out there. The last line effectively personalizes the piece, which really helped suck me in. Keep it up!

  • Aurora_Light On Monday, June 23, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    i like it much so and agree a dreamer's write this truly must be and a true dream at that

  • pessum ire animus On Sunday, June 22, 2003, pessum ire animus (57)By person wrote:

    brilliant.

  • Six-Out On Saturday, June 21, 2003, Six-Out (1438)By person wrote:

    I agree with Justin, the more I read, the more I like. Great job, this is an absolute treasure.

  • A former member wrote: Man, I like this. May I ask what D F L V means?

  • diavolessa On Saturday, June 21, 2003, diavolessa (208)By person wrote:

    Yes you may. L~la D~diavolessa F~fose V~vera. It's in italian, in english it would mean: The she-devil was true. :)


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