The Spirits Inside

By Deviated09

Of the Water and of the Fire.
Of the Earth and of the Air.
We, the eternals of this land,
partake in fervent destruction.

Iron, the will of us all, rusting slowly.
Gold, the lust I must feel, dulled out.
Silk, purity unchanged, torn apart.
Oak, life essence, fading so quickly.

If ye thought we would abade easily,
You were never more wrong than now.
For we are here to stay forevermore,
Unintelligible, cowardice, soulless.

"The masses have corrupted me now.
I feel my life changing unknowingly.
The hate is now unbearable again.
I must release before all is gone."

Before he thought he shouldn't wander,
The boy was forever lost in his rage.
Again, the masses have taken another.
One less innocent spirit inside us all.

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Published on Saturday, February 11, 2012. Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

A short piece that has some deep meaning to me.

Comments on "The Spirits Inside"

On Thursday, June 20, 2013, HeadpatSlut (259) wrote:

I won't even try to guess at the esoteric side of this, but I'm in love with the imagery, I think of a council of blackened gods summoning up flames and ice to smite a world of insanity; the lines seemed to creep, rising with each stanza before culminating with the final. Thanks for posting, Deviated.
On Tuesday, June 11, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (334) wrote:

This was beautifully complex. It radiated some really raw emotions, well done I regret not reading you sooner. xoxo
On Wednesday, June 12, 2013, Deviated09 (90) wrote:

Thanks! This is probably my favourite piece that I have on here. It's one of my all time best, in my opinion. Check out my other stuff sometime =) and thanks for the kind words!
On Sunday, December 23, 2012, knightmirror (426) wrote:

i am thoroughly impressed with the amount of intellect and truth in every line but also within every space of every worded line.....not-to-mention you seem so humble when it comes to sharing such intense beauty with just anyone and everyone....thanks for creating this for those who dare to ingest with the minds eye your sagacious descriptions....-knight
On Thursday, December 27, 2012, Deviated09 (90) wrote:

I'm touched, and quite enthralled by this.. Many thanks, good sir! That is why I made this account, so that I could share what I have to who ever may need to see it to get that little bit of inspiration or thought that they were looking for. If it helps just one person out in some way, then I know I have done my part. I know I still need a lot of practice and a lot of work on it, but I still have many years to do so.
On Thursday, February 16, 2012, Ladyhawke (394) wrote:

Wow.... I'm sorry, I'm trying to find somethiing more elegant ad graciful to say to this, but I think 'wow' just about does it. This left me in awe. You weaved these verses so well together. And generally, I like pieces that rhyme, but by God if I'm not absolutley in love with this. This was exquisite. Thank you so much for sharing this, it speaks depths. This piece breathes... it is alive. Brava!!
On Thursday, December 27, 2012, Deviated09 (90) wrote:

Many thanks for your generous comment madam =] (I don't know why my replies were never posted on here, I guess my phone is being difficult again..) I'm glad I was able to offer you some entertainment!
On Saturday, February 11, 2012, Magdalena (614) wrote:

Excellent write...
On Thursday, February 16, 2012, Deviated09 (90) wrote:

Thank you =]