The Plagued Soul
By Undertaker
Sitting upon a tall hill observing a young man on
a cliff
With a hanging head, blank, standing motionless,
stiff
The waves of the ocean bashed
hard against rocks found below
While the sun was setting
over distant blue, its brilliance did show
With
a grin stretching ear to ear,
I stood there, these yellow
eyes did peer
His heart speaking, echoes
of dark memories past
Shattered mind sheered, blood filled veins
pumping fast
Unforgotten flashbacks
make for a grievous stake
Shoved strait into the heart causing
this gruesome fate
a stone blocked
future, and a bitterly sliced past
The loss of love, never meant
to last
With no where to go
No
hope left to show
The mist, incoming
clouds touch gently, his hollow face
A bleeding heart, lost,
the time has come, finish this race
Focused
deep into the depths of the dark blue
This damned soul, misplaced,
has no clue
My eyes set only on the
sight of this man
Forbid to offer him a helping hand
Approaches the edge, head fixed on the
sharp rocks below
A far distant ship horn silently beginning
to blow
Former Clips overwhelming
his dying mind
Plays prior thoughts, mean, brutishly unkind
With one foot forward, never looking
back
Slips noiseless into the abyss that is violently black
-Undertaker
Comments on "The Plagued Soul"
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A former member wrote:
The flow of the words really made this stand out to me. Nicely done.
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On Friday, May 18, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
To be beyond all hope and despairing another tomorrow. Never been there and never hope to but this paints an accurate portrait of the many who have gone before. Very classy and I can only say one thing Unde, cheers!
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A former member wrote:
The feelings of solitude and depravity are as eerie as the rock on which he stands.
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On Friday, May 18, 2012, Deviated09
(90) wrote:
Indeed a very excellent write. You've displayed the unspeakable thoughts that have run through my mind quite well. Many was there a time I wish I could of had that dismal cliff to overlook.