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Oh Daddy, How could you?
By Sticky Kitty
I stand alone
wrapped in desperate inching time
so unlike human heartbeat
fast and stiff
he will touch me under secrets
find me freezing in blood red blankets
trembling
laying as sleep.
"Catch my soul", I yell
a stranger passing below
stained dull glass
of window
pray you may keep it safe
oh kitty,
you are so fragile.
Public perfect of a man
touching kitty in the night
claim to teaching in the dark
justify
unworthiness would take an innocence
crimson pure with words.
Hold my breath
wish to die
daddy daddy
go away.
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Copyright 2005 Kitty Hexe
Published on Tuesday, January 25, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Oh Daddy, How could you?"
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On Wednesday, March 14, 2012, Deviated09
(90)
wrote:
Wow... Very deep.. As someone else said, Who will keep us safe, if not our protectors.. New fan here. Damned good, but depressing work.
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On Monday, May 9, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Fuck!!! ummm... damn, New found fan...
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On Friday, February 20, 2009, KuroiBara
(16) wrote:
ouch, that must hurt a lot...betrayal is one of the most effective forms of torture, and is twice as potent when it comes from family members....Very very good, and very very sad.
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A former member wrote:
who will save us from our protectors?
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On Monday, October 31, 2005, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Excellent write on such a seriously sad subject.
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A former member wrote:
Sad but I like it.It's very deep and dark
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A former member wrote:
sad but I like it. Keep up the good work
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On Friday, April 8, 2005, darkleprechaun
(56) wrote:
*tears* such a thief should be put to death... well written all the same. dave
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On Saturday, March 5, 2005, -Oz-
(131) wrote:
the way you describe things is just so amazing...it's like watching an film...-Oz
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On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
wow..this is simply awesome!
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A former member wrote:
Wow.. I don't even know how to explain how amazing this is. You have such talent. - Holly
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
Welcome to DP. This is an amazing write...Just amazing.
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A former member wrote:
man this is a good right were doo you find the inspiration
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On Monday, February 14, 2005, Munkey
(79) wrote:
Oh well...shit thats deep. -Munkey-
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On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Zara Synn
(57) wrote:
Wow...it's hard for me to comment on peices like these...I'm always wanting to get all personal...Just know that I enjoyed, and felt, your writing.
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On Thursday, February 3, 2005, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
very dark indeed, this is something the site needs. Welcome to the DP society, lol.
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On Thursday, January 27, 2005, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
this is beautiful. "catch my soul" wow.~ss
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On Thursday, January 27, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
powerful and gutwrenching indeed. i dont know what else to say...im caught in the speechless spider web again...
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On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
very powerful and full of emotion, extremely sad, great write ~Emptyness~
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On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
yay, you've enabled comments on this one! I read this before but couldn't comment. Extremely powerful write, gutwrenching and so effective. Great piece, brutally so.
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A former member wrote:
this is a dark ass poem
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