Oh Daddy, How could you?

By Sticky Kitty

I stand alone
wrapped in desperate inching time
so unlike human heartbeat
fast and stiff
he will touch me under secrets
find me freezing in blood red blankets
trembling
laying as sleep.

"Catch my soul", I yell
a stranger passing below
stained dull glass
of window
pray you may keep it safe
oh kitty,
you are so fragile.

Public perfect of a man
touching kitty in the night
claim to teaching in the dark
justify
unworthiness would take an innocence
crimson pure with words.

Hold my breath
wish to die
daddy daddy
go away.

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Copyright 2005 Kitty Hexe
Published on Tuesday, January 25, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Deviated09 On Wednesday, March 14, 2012, Deviated09 (90)By person wrote:

    Wow... Very deep.. As someone else said, Who will keep us safe, if not our protectors.. New fan here. Damned good, but depressing work.

  • Devilish On Monday, May 9, 2011, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Fuck!!! ummm... damn, New found fan... Scholar

  • KuroiBara On Friday, February 20, 2009, KuroiBara (16)By person wrote:

    ouch, that must hurt a lot...betrayal is one of the most effective forms of torture, and is twice as potent when it comes from family members....Very very good, and very very sad.

  • A former member wrote: who will save us from our protectors?

  • island warrior On Monday, October 31, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Excellent write on such a seriously sad subject.

  • A former member wrote: Sad but I like it.It's very deep and dark

  • A former member wrote: sad but I like it. Keep up the good work

  • darkleprechaun On Friday, April 8, 2005, darkleprechaun (56)By person wrote:

    *tears* such a thief should be put to death... well written all the same. dave

  • -Oz- On Saturday, March 5, 2005, -Oz- (134)By person wrote:

    the way you describe things is just so amazing...it's like watching an film...-Oz

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    wow..this is simply awesome!

  • A former member wrote: Wow.. I don't even know how to explain how amazing this is. You have such talent. - Holly

  • BleedSilver On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    Welcome to DP. This is an amazing write...Just amazing.

  • A former member wrote: man this is a good right were doo you find the inspiration

  • Munkey On Monday, February 14, 2005, Munkey (79)By person wrote:

    Oh well...shit thats deep. -Munkey-

  • Zara Synn On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Zara Synn (57)By person wrote:

    Wow...it's hard for me to comment on peices like these...I'm always wanting to get all personal...Just know that I enjoyed, and felt, your writing.

  • Mistress Morbid On Thursday, February 3, 2005, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    very dark indeed, this is something the site needs. Welcome to the DP society, lol.

  • murder_in_clubland On Thursday, January 27, 2005, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    this is beautiful. "catch my soul" wow.~ss

  • AniDayz On Thursday, January 27, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    powerful and gutwrenching indeed. i dont know what else to say...im caught in the speechless spider web again...

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    very powerful and full of emotion, extremely sad, great write ~Emptyness~

  • purr_verse On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    yay, you've enabled comments on this one! I read this before but couldn't comment. Extremely powerful write, gutwrenching and so effective. Great piece, brutally so.

  • A former member wrote: this is a dark ass poem

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