Come

By Gideon Lost

Come, shed your life
Like stiff heavy clothes
Falling crumpled to the floor
Feel the air against your soft tender parts
Coming to life
For me to warp and twist
Yes, I will bend you
In wonderful warm ways
A crooked fat phallus chafing places
Other lovers have forgotten
Stinging so tenderly deep
You will forget who you want to be
Writhing and arching and aching
A fevered sweat
Again and again and again
Remembering to forget
Or forgetting to remember
This moment is now.

Austerberto R. Palis, Jr.
March 27, 2005; 03:57am

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Copyright 2005 Austerberto
Published on Sunday, March 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very Inspiring. Expressing Your Feelings through Poetry is Amazing

  • A former member wrote: Nice work!

  • Stephanie Sideways On Thursday, December 20, 2012, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    Well. That got me in 'the mood' .Shape I am at work! ;-) very sexy!

  • ShardsofSilence On Sunday, October 30, 2005, ShardsofSilence (219)By person wrote:

    i'm loving this ^^ you never cease to amaze me

  • A former member wrote: Your pieces always read like pearls of genuine wisdom. I should have faved you long ago. Please accept my apology for the delay. Fave.

  • Gideon Lost On Saturday, April 2, 2005, Gideon Lost (137)By person wrote:

    AWESOME man! Thanks!

  • Sticky Kitty On Sunday, March 27, 2005, Sticky Kitty (241)By person wrote:

    read this again *favorites list*

  • Sticky Kitty On Sunday, March 27, 2005, Sticky Kitty (241)By person wrote:

    amazing i must say. this was incrediable. *speechless* -kitty

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, March 27, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    "Remembering to forget Or forgetting to remember" i like that..its a REALLY unique line..another fabulous write.

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