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Bent
By purr_verse
I've tried so hard
to fit myself into the slot machine
but my penny is bent.
Someone offers
to lend me their penny
but
I
refuse.
I search
for a bent machine.
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Copyright 2003 purr_verse
Published on Monday, November 10, 2003.
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On Monday, April 11, 2016, Stranger
(264)
wrote:
Just stumbled across this. So glad I did. Brilliant.
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On Sunday, March 6, 2016, Broken doll
(15) wrote:
Well written, it made me giggle as well as provoked thought.
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A former member wrote:
I like this a lot, the bent penny part made me chuckle a little but the message of this was powerful good write-Mrk
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A former member wrote:
clever little grub worm you are. I kind of see it as someone trying to lend you their two cents. good piece of work.
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A former member wrote:
As I scramble through what seems to be limitless brilliant pieces, this one stands out, marked as a featured work and with a simple click of a mouse I find blissful creativity.
I find many different meanings in this piece, but from my own interpretation I see someone so unique that only someone with the same uniqueness would complete the puzzle. Fantastic write, so write on my friend, write on.
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On Monday, November 23, 2015, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Brilliant piece, and ooh so clever. -Bows to you
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On Friday, September 18, 2015, Grim_Sorrow
(75) wrote:
brief and brilliant, well done.
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On Sunday, September 13, 2015, Steven86175
(16) wrote:
Love the story and symbolism.
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On Saturday, August 8, 2015, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
..And again! Still a Classic. Love it.
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On Monday, June 15, 2015, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
This came up on the Featured Works part of the front page..I couldn't resist and man does this piece still provide a knockout. A forever classic.
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A former member wrote:
This one's gold. Every time I reread it, I find new meaning, more depth.
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On Tuesday, March 3, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Still love this one, great message. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
as we all should
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On Wednesday, September 11, 2013, Lux
(299) wrote:
I keep coming back for this. There's too much here, that I hope I never forget. Sigh...
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On Saturday, August 31, 2013, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
Timeless classic.
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On Monday, May 20, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Great piece! Always bet on the bent ones... Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
very nice....i found the wording very clever....i love it ....
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On Saturday, February 2, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Cool! I'll be the bent slot machine. I've been bent for years...try me! Nice write :)
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A former member wrote:
so this popped up on one of my screens and I am thankful, its worth keeping alive
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On Tuesday, October 23, 2012, Dei
(665) wrote:
Ive read this one so many times. still one of my favs
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On Sunday, August 26, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303) wrote:
Are you kidding me? Can this get any more perfect? Not likely. Clever, brief, full of impact. I'm in love.
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A former member wrote:
This is absolutely wonderful! I have no other words that can describe it! Just wonderful! ^_^
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On Sunday, March 25, 2012, TheForgottenGoddess
(9) wrote:
I have read this over and over again and it never ceases to amaze me. Wonderfully expressed.
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On Saturday, February 25, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Holy shit this is brilliant.. Congrats on POD.. So very well deserved.
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On Saturday, February 25, 2012, DarkAsh
(45) wrote:
ha! I just found this. Great poem. So simple and so profound. Especially the notion of lending pennies, I wonder what that means? Bookmarked!
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On Tuesday, December 20, 2011, A poet of madness
(115) wrote:
i wish id read this sooner. Maybe in my old life I wouldn't have appreciated it. I love this
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A former member wrote:
this is wonderful. LOVE IT!
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On Saturday, June 4, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Yes I agree, the best ever! It fits like a glove to 100% of daily life!
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On Sunday, April 24, 2011, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
One of the most perfect poems written. Ever.
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On Thursday, April 21, 2011, jonLyndon
(113) wrote:
This forever remains worthy of it's Poem of the Day Award. No poem is more perfectly bent...
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On Thursday, March 25, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(177) wrote:
SO cute, I hope you find your bent machine. And its everything you long for.
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On Thursday, March 25, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
This is so awesome..:D < thats what I look like right now..thanks.
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A former member wrote:
Very nice, I know how you feel. ;->
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On Friday, April 24, 2009, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
*BANG!* You're in my Top 20 ;)
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On Sunday, January 18, 2009, palenoble
(47) wrote:
been there xD
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On Monday, April 14, 2008, Distorted_Reality
(101) wrote:
so I wasn't quite sure how to word myself...I just wanted to say that I really dig this piece...ha however gay that might sound, but I think it's brilliantly worded and it's almost as if you were describing the way I am and live my life...*shrugs* it could possibly not relate to me at all, but that's just the way my mind percieves it...and with that said *bookmarks*
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On Sunday, March 2, 2008, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
thats right! if you don't fit, then find something that fits you! perfect...
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A former member wrote:
ditto.
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A former member wrote:
Best poem I think I've ever read. This will eternally resound in the deepest parts of my heart.
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On Sunday, February 3, 2008, Trigger
(70) wrote:
This is very good. The lack of desire to conform the the rest of he world, coupled with the want to find the right place to be. Faving this.
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A former member wrote:
this hit me hard in the head.. perfect.
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
I second all of this.
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On Friday, August 3, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
talk about impressive comment towers, it seems i am late to critique... but try as i may, you are ink tongue girl, and your writes always offer unparrallel advice and wisdom, and alternate thought... bravo.
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