Comments by Trigger
- "The messege in this is so potent and clear, and like Ruby said, not too dramatic. I love the feel of this, it's almost turbulent. Great write, Phoenix, please keep it up. -Trigger"
Posted by Trigger on "Fake." by Phoenix
- "I remember you reading this to me. I still love it. I think "time is money . every moment is costly" is my favourite line. I love the whole work though. The irony in the kids' lack of education for thatmoment of happiness, the pets running loose into the dangers of civilization. Great write Danni. -Trigger"
Posted by Trigger on "the circus inside" by GraveFlower
- "I agree weith the rapist. This was strangely captivating. I like the concept. Keep it up. -Trigger"
Posted by Trigger on "Contract" by Phoenix
- "This is really good. I love the irony of it all, and I am sorry for whatever inspired it. Great write though, I'm fav-ing it"
Posted by Trigger on "Delete." by Phoenix
- "My criticism; Leave it as is. I really like this how it stands. You just needed to get it out, well, this is raw and raw works with this. That's my advice, take it or leave it.
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Posted by Trigger on "Prophetically Poetic" by Idle Monkey
- "The San Francisco story is true. It happened some years ago. I may not have quoted the note verbatum, but it is very close."
Posted by Trigger on "Depth Perception" by Trigger
- "This is unlike your normal style. Refreshing really. I like the atmosphere to it, well portreyed. It was dismal, yet, strangely uplifting... at least for me. "Green light" just as everything fell through... such is life. Kep it up, this is good. -Trigger"
Posted by Trigger on "Mother Russia" by Lawless Fighter
- "This is very good. The lack of desire to conform the the rest of he world, coupled with the want to find the right place to be. Faving this."
Posted by Trigger on "Bent" by purr_verse
- "WTF!?!? This is spectacular!!! I was laughing my ass off the whole time! I just can't wait to see what you say about the jews..."
Posted by Trigger on "Genesis. . ." by Lawless Fighter
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