lovely dark and deep

By shortandpretentious

tonight i've made a decision
i miss your hair your touch
these things i'll never get back
yeah they all say to forget
you say it too i try but sometimes
i roll over to the wall pretend
you're there say you're beautiful
& sleep with your ghost in my arms

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Published on Monday, November 29, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "lovely dark and deep"

On Friday, April 24, 2009, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

*BANG!* You're in my Top 20 ;)
On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

Ah, love it! Yet another piece of proof to back up my decision to fave you and another piece that gets me thinking, "Why the fuck isn't everyone else faving you" -Carl
On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Sticky Kitty (241) wrote:

sweet -kitty
On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Lynaes (854) wrote:

I feel this so deeply.. you have such a perfect way of saying some of the most important things in so few words.. wonderful work. I hope more people come to read your work.
On Sunday, January 23, 2005, Loneal (86) wrote:

You nicely captured the loss ... well done and keep up the good work. ~L
A former member wrote: very beautiful and heartfilled... i loved it
On Monday, November 29, 2004, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

beautiful. heartrending. concise and perfectly expressed piece - simply wonderful.