lovely dark and deep

By shortandpretentious

tonight i've made a decision
i miss your hair your touch
these things i'll never get back
yeah they all say to forget
you say it too i try but sometimes
i roll over to the wall pretend
you're there say you're beautiful
& sleep with your ghost in my arms

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Copyright 2004 shortandpretentious
Published on Monday, November 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, April 24, 2009, carlosjackal (2510)By person wrote:

    *BANG!* You're in my Top 20 ;)

  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, carlosjackal (2510)By person wrote:

    Ah, love it! Yet another piece of proof to back up my decision to fave you and another piece that gets me thinking, "Why the fuck isn't everyone else faving you" -Carl

  • Sticky Kitty On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Sticky Kitty (253)By person wrote:

    sweet -kitty

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Lynaes (877)By person wrote:

    I feel this so deeply.. you have such a perfect way of saying some of the most important things in so few words.. wonderful work. I hope more people come to read your work.

  • Loneal On Sunday, January 23, 2005, Loneal (86)By person wrote:

    You nicely captured the loss ... well done and keep up the good work. ~L

  • A former member wrote: very beautiful and heartfilled... i loved it

  • purr_verse On Monday, November 29, 2004, purr_verse (1036)By person wrote:

    beautiful. heartrending. concise and perfectly expressed piece - simply wonderful.

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