halloween & the 24th of january

By shortandpretentious

slouched but tightly holding your hand
in mine we walked at the same
pace the click of your shoes echoed
across the bridge you straightened mentioned
similar strides perfect copies really

that couple walks to their own electric
internal beat laughing love
maybe, when i saw you later that night
i picked up my pace and started to run

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.

Published on Tuesday, January 25, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Awards

May 5th, 2010

Comments on "halloween & the 24th of january"

A former member wrote: Abstract (?) very good if it was intended to be like that
On Monday, May 14, 2007, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

@=)))))))) Magic lies herein -Carl
On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Lynaes (854) wrote:

"that couple walks to their own electric internal beat laughing love".. that part alone is stunning.. simply beautiful. wow.
A former member wrote: Say what you must in 256 characters or less please =) cool
On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, Solace (1065) wrote:

Really this is highly commendable writing, the style and its candid brief expression...it is truly a defining piece of work, well rounded and strangely hauntingly enchanting, suits the halloween part i suppose :)
On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

This is outstanding. *faves*
On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (353) wrote:

'maybe when I saw you later that night I picked up my pace and started to run'..*sighs* I want a book with all of your poetry in it.Just so it was right there..and I could reach out for it whenever I wanted..
On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, blue (1409) wrote:

:) damn fine writing, a wave of refreshment. Thank you. ~b
A former member wrote: awesome write