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Strangers
By asailorsangel
They spent the night with strangers
Locks shattered and walls crumbled
With the force of the unguarded emotion
Only the shadows watched as they
Seductively removed each others
Masks
They slowly gently flowed through
The cavern of dimmed light a dance
Of lovers to unfold
The silenced whispered in amazement
The dark stood in awe of how time
Stopped for this man and this woman
There they stood bare-naked
Strangers in the night that
Met in the space between
Now left with more questions
Than answers in a world
That had no walls.
RT03~
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Copyright 2003 asailorsangel
Published on Wednesday, November 19, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Strangers"
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On Saturday, March 31, 2018, Jeangrim
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wrote:
Silence whispered in amazement... I love this!
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On Sunday, December 9, 2012, BrideToAgony
(13) wrote:
I really like your last three lines. It makes you wonder
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On Sunday, November 30, 2003, Recycled
(94) wrote:
This had sparks of talent dancing on each line. Off to read your other works.
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A former member wrote:
Very thought provoking work. I like the way this was written and how the reading was left dangling. Very beautiful and well written. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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A former member wrote:
This reminds me of the movie Eyes Wide Shut, even though I have not seen it. But what I have seen, clicks in my head like this. Erotic in its own right.
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On Wednesday, November 19, 2003, DarkDruidess
(326) wrote:
I found this incredibly beautiful...wonderful job.
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On Wednesday, November 19, 2003, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
I'll second that. Gorgeous.
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