Darkness of her heart

By Bloodofdeadpoets

Falling forever never ending it seems

Like trying to awaken from nightmare dreams

Giving up all hope while clinching your chest

But still trying not to let your soul come to rest

Clinging to life while your finger nails break

That’s when your enemies choose this time to awake

I’m screaming out at the bright light i see up above

Then into the darkness flies a beautiful dove

But she to is consumed and quickly must depart

For nothing can save you from the darkness of her heart

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Copyright 2003 bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Tuesday, March 25, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "Clinging to life while your fingernails break" I think we've all been there before. Very nice piece. ~Urban Shipwreck~

  • asailorsangel On Tuesday, April 15, 2003, asailorsangel (34)By person wrote:

    This is what writing and reading other works is all about you captured my emotions exactly in this second

  • A former member wrote: I loved that poem... dark and beautiful. Keep it up! :)

  • A former member wrote: MUCH LOVE FOR YOUR WORK HERE.KEEP WRITTING. WE'RE READING!

  • cre On Saturday, March 29, 2003, cre (410)By person wrote:

    I *really* like this. It is beautiful. Great write.

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Tuesday, March 25, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (243)By person wrote:

    Nice poem. It flowed well

  • A former member wrote: I like it nice job.

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