i swear the city lights dim when everyone's asleep
By Jonas
poetry
art in general
such beautiful trivial little amalgamated
lies resting precariously
on the surface of truth
and
i remember one rainy night
hell outside in the city on a saturday
for a man on the road
north beach is a little hip again
all the lit kids who fell in love with kerouac in a lecture hall
and drove home for thanksgiving in a new honda
i caught your eye
as you drove past
gave me the thumbs up and laughed
afraid
maybe just of what smell a wet stranger might bring to the car
...and i wont lie to you...
this piece is written on a slant
and i'm the kind to curse a hill as i walk up it
i digress
north beach
a bookstore in the rain
the famed city
lights home to weirdos and wanderers
warm windows and jazz from pearls
spilled into the streets
and into my ears
i ran into
an apparition
my heart left me to rap on the being of little flowers
by rail road tracks
and forget the greater goings on in a bottle
of cheap wine
spinning off into an indulgent decline
heralded
as ascention to the golden seat of immortality
life is art
always
art is always a lie
looking pretty resting comfortably
on the velvet truth
and along this line of reasoning you have to
laugh or die
i smiled and walked with the spirit into the
bookstore
a poet on the long road
come to stop off at one of
many homes
past the 'no public restroom' sign i came to the
clerk
asked him to point me to poetry
'no packs in the
store, you can check it here' he eyed me
then i was moses
walking to the stairs dripping as people parted to give me
a wide
berth
i started up the stairs and near the top is a framed
poem
and i read
i was sad because the current of the
poem ran perfectly opposite to that of the bookstore
in this place
where the two things that looked the same on the surface but were repulsed
by each other like two ends of polarized iron
there was silence
and the spirit with me whispered words of encouragement and flew away
into the space bwtween the place and the words
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Comments on "i swear the city lights dim when everyone's asleep"
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A former member wrote:
"...and i wont lie to you...
this piece is written on a slant
and i'm the kind to curse a hill as i walk up it
i digress" the whole poem was full of clever and insightful lines, and somehow these lines stuck with me. so observant and human, a little thing that people do.. lovely, man. thanks for the write.
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A former member wrote:
amaizing.....enough sed!
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On Friday, April 13, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
like - " no colords " allowed in the cotton club - beautifull irony, the sick twists ... your sense of bearing and situation is amazing ... as far as i'm concerned, youre rich and famous... funguy
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A former member wrote:
I can't stop reading this.
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A former member wrote:
"spinning off into an indulgent decline" Compelling; well written. Great observation in the telling... and what better place than "a bookstore in the rain" ...
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On Tuesday, November 22, 2005, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
eloquent and of your "old style".......i can only imagine your sight.......but i love to hear you speak it........well done...............urban
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On Monday, November 21, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Brilliance - speaks volumes in minutiae - anecdotal and yet driving through subtlety's depths - fantastic/memorial, amazing!
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On Monday, November 21, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
Just outstanding. I loved every excellently-observed moment of this. *faves*
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A former member wrote:
"all the lit kids who fell in love with kerouac in a lecture hall"- this was freaking awesome.
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A former member wrote:
wow...the message behind your words has left me gasping for air in the current of this piece...beautifully written...this could make a fish gasp for breath if one were to read it (but we all know fish can't read). *Evangel*
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A former member wrote:
no, but they sure can write, can't they?