flightless fancy

By not an addict



so sad to watch the faerie
try to dance without her wings
freedom over the horizon...
but always just out of reach.
and although i see her smile,
a truer beauty never seen,
there's a sadness in her eyes
screaming "really,
what's a faerie without wings?"








(you are missed)

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Copyright 2005 not an addict
Published on Wednesday, June 29, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: the poem was sad, the words were amazing, and it was just an amazing write.......write on.......~S

  • Miztaken4beauty On Wednesday, April 28, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (176)By person wrote:

    So sad. To never be able to taste freedom again. horrible. good write.

  • Aurora_Light On Tuesday, July 22, 2008, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    A marvelous work, so deep and touch done with a grace of beauty

  • Bluegirl On Sunday, June 22, 2008, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    Amazingly done. This one hits me deep down. Love this. *fave*

  • Jonas On Friday, October 13, 2006, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    quietly and deeply magical. sadly moving. your words moved in and out of rhythm and rhyme in a way i liked.

  • flying_fox On Tuesday, June 13, 2006, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    oh this is wonderful... so few words that really pack a punch. There are so many possibly interpretations and fitting situations this could be lent to. Love it. Magical stuff.

  • purr_verse On Wednesday, May 24, 2006, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    Brilliantly concise, painfully insightful heartcrushing piece. This is an extremely well written snapshot that truly resonates. *faves*.

  • spaniellie On Thursday, December 29, 2005, spaniellie (76)By person wrote:

    this was brilliant. i loved this poem. a fave.

  • A former member wrote: you don't have me favorited...or at least visible...my heart can't take much more.. ( of this ) you know I love you.

  • doll on the rag On Saturday, August 13, 2005, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    just a nothingnote... lovely, you are missed indeed.

  • A former member wrote: I cannot express how many times I have basked in the beauty of this poem, and trembled with it's sadness..It is late, I am tired, and struggle to convey just how this touched me ~ Pray you forgive me. Perhaps giving it a special place on my favourites wil

  • A former member wrote: -will determine how much I appreciate this - How tremendously beautiful it is. You have captured a pure essence in so few words.."freedom over the horizon... but always just out of reach". Thank you, who ever you are..

  • not an addict On Tuesday, July 5, 2005, not an addict (45)By person wrote:

    ...i think i'm beyond speechless at the moment. admittedly this piece holds a very dear place in my heart, but to think i could have moved one who lives poetry as you do... thank you, truly.

  • Just a Rose On Wednesday, June 29, 2005, Just a Rose (25)By person wrote:

    i really like this one, what is a faeri w/out wings? good job

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