and when...
By KittyStryker
and when you look at me
from across the room
and think i'm the most beautiful thing
you've seen
please tell me that
even if it's not actually true
and when you kiss me
please do it with a passion
that makes global warming
seem like a minor heat
and when you hold me
please hold me tightly
til i almost cannot breathe-
draw me close enough
so that every breath, every inhalation
is scented with you
and when you whisper
"i love you" into my ear
please let it mean just that
and not "i love you;
now change into someone else
for me"
and when we fuck
when you grunt and heave and thrust your way
into my core
please let me roll over and go to sleep
i want you to fuck me til i'm too tired to talk
anyway
and when we fight
please hit me above the belt
and i'll try to do the same for you
and we'll make up, kiss
and fight again
and when you think it won't
work out
please reconsider
Awards
Comments on "and when..."
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On Sunday, March 4, 2012, SummerCoat
(29) wrote:
oh how i felt your words...
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On Tuesday, August 4, 2009, Gideon Lost
(138) wrote:
Revisiting....amazing. I am still alive. -Gideon
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On Sunday, January 13, 2008, Mari
(425) wrote:
so simple. but so honest and polite. rock on
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On Saturday, December 15, 2007, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
That ending murdered me.
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A former member wrote:
a very moving, touching and emotional poem. I loved it.
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On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
hehe...this makes me feel more alone than i already did...but its a fabulous piece of writing
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On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
Awww I should show Ryan this....How sweet...~xXx
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On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, kisserott_death
(47) wrote:
Wow this is amazing...I really like this...-takes all of this into concideration-...
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On Tuesday, April 5, 2005, Gideon Lost
(138) wrote:
"Tell me no secrets, tell me some lies . . ." Gosh I love your work Basty. You write from such a place we all remember being there. Thanks for sharing. P.S. I still have your number. :O)
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On Tuesday, April 5, 2005, Gideon Lost
(138) wrote:
P.S. FAVS!!
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On Tuesday, April 5, 2005, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
Fantastic write. I felt every moment. The passion you write with, and with such original clarity, is magnificent.