The Him and the Her of One More Night
By XCryingMinotaurX
It is dark and cold.
Basement bedroom.
Bare feet upon red carpet.
A breeze enters through the blinds.
William Orbit on the stereo: "Adagio for Strings". Remix.
Bare feet leave red carpet.
Drowning into blood red sheets. Soft.
His body will not rest alone tonight. Human contact. Her heat.
He let her have her way. Always her way. The only way.
Lips touched flesh and body spasms knocked books off shelves.
Her tongue found his nerve and she drank him down deep.
She made her mark. Scarred him. Marred him. She owned him.
Not forever. Not tomorrow. For now. For one more night.
He tasted of perfection. She could not get enough. Ever.
Morning rain like holy water washed away the night before.
She spent hours staring at the glow of the sun. On his naked body.
She closed her eyes to believe this dream. He opened his.
He saw her still. Sleep. Having given all she had.
He took note of her snore. Her position. Her hair upon his pillow.
Morning after spent in bed. Face to face. A pillow apart.
The future was outside the room. Waiting to take them away.
Secrets spilled out upon delicious flesh and the day dragged on.
Alone. They left the room together. Like lovers.
She had a habit of loving the ones she could not have.
He had the habit of having the ones he could not love.
This was the Him and the Her of One More Night
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Comments on "The Him and the Her of One More Night"
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A former member wrote:
The second last line I found fascinating..
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On Tuesday, January 8, 2013, Star
(879) wrote:
sensual and beautiful also romantic. this is amazing. excellent 10 from me. btw congrats on poem of the day :)
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On Tuesday, January 8, 2013, Elle Amore
(17) wrote:
I'm speechless. This is a beautiful work. Sensual descriptions, both sides of the affair demonstrated. Absolutely wonderful.
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A former member wrote:
This poem definitely deserved to be poem of the day. It's really great.
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A former member wrote:
this is amazing, one of the best ive read yet.
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On Monday, October 22, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
So glad this made PotD, definitely one of my faves!
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A former member wrote:
an amazing poem, so glad I took the time to read it.
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On Sunday, October 7, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
This sent shivers down my body, I cannot get enough of this no matter how many time I reread it. It feels like masochism to keep reading a work that takes me to the place I'm left in but I keep trying to understand. Perfection.
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful. You have a way with words. Well done.
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A former member wrote:
i love this poem its one of the best ive read so far
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On Thursday, April 24, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
Last stanza and final line wrapped this up beautifully... I don't even know what else to say... This was extremely well done
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On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, toy soldier
(26) wrote:
you know, i bookmarked this a long time ago. and it is still IMO the best poem on this site. realy.
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On Sunday, February 26, 2006, Sin
(1135) wrote:
the whole write was amazing but that last stanza...it stung...this was one i wish i couldnt relate to ~kristy
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On Thursday, January 26, 2006, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
In pieces is where this left me. Dear god.
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On Saturday, June 4, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_
(69) wrote:
this ripped me to pieces and made me cry. thank you--Steph
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On Tuesday, May 31, 2005, Labitina
(37) wrote:
This was amazing I agree with cucuio on that line, that was too perfect and too true, this really was an awesome write ~Christina
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
Sweet and lovely and yummy didn't like the last line though dont think it was needed -kitty
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A former member wrote:
I love this. by far one of my favorites
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
awesome... you are a wonderful writer
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On Sunday, June 20, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
Wow. The ending was amazing. The whole thing was amazing. I saw it so clearly... so vividly. I really loved this piece. Great work. -Glass
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A former member wrote:
She had a habit of loving the ones she could not have.
He had the habit of having the ones he could not love.
Well gee, isn't that always the way things go in life? We all know it sucks, and you had an awesome write! Keep it up! : )
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On Saturday, May 22, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
theres a certain sadness in this poem which i think many could relate. very nicely written. :)
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On Monday, May 10, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
*morning rain like holy water washed away the night before*amazing line in an amazing write Jen.i liked this very much.of course i like anything you do.much love,chris
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On Saturday, May 8, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
This appealed to me...maybe cause they have something I don't or they haven't what I don't want. Still it intrigued me. Great work with this one.
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On Saturday, May 8, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
this made me cry. i miss this- i knew this, once, i knew the sweet flame, the passion of now... and god, the last stanza rips me to shreds. is this me? i hope not.