Flesh.Like.Fire

By XCryingMinotaurX

Yesterday,
I felt autumn.
Today,
I felt summer.


Please Father forgive me,
for I have sinned.
I have felt the burn before the decay,
and I have felt the death of all things.

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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Wednesday, August 11, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Let go of what isn't working for you. You are only draining your energy. Trust that something much better, something you can't imagine, is awaiting you.

  • A former member wrote: amazing. so simple and haunting. i loved this.

  • xserratedsoulx On Thursday, February 9, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    LOVE IT. ~lauren~

  • knightmirror On Saturday, October 9, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    you are always superb and wirte with intensity i can't handle sometimes...thanks for sharing...chris

  • Savannah On Tuesday, September 28, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    awesome, as usual

  • XCryingMinotaurX On Thursday, August 12, 2004, XCryingMinotaurX (20)By person wrote:

    thanks guys. whats funny is where this actually stems from...

  • Twilight On Friday, August 13, 2004, Twilight (1782)By person wrote:

    now you know me and all the rest of us would love to know:)

  • XCryingMinotaurX On Saturday, August 14, 2004, XCryingMinotaurX (20)By person wrote:

    hehe...i got a wicked bad sunburn. then the second half came to me when i was working with the first lines. they seemed to mesh well...so it was fate, i guess!

  • Northstar On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    *love this*--truly and deeply haunting

  • purr_verse On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    gods, this is deeply...soulshaking somehow... feels ageless and ancient at once. wonderful.

  • A former member wrote: words cant do this justice, amazing

  • A former member wrote: "i have felt the burn before the decay" great line there. Great write here. Hell yeah, very interesting.

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