Digital Love
By Delphoid-Q
I met a girl the other day
But have never seen her smile -
Nor have I heard her voice so sweet;
Nor gazed into the fathoms of her eyes.
I got to know a girl the other day
Through words that flashed upon a screen.
We spoke across a web of wire;
Our longing reduced to binary.
I fell in love with a girl the other day
And we shared all of our fears.
We danced across a silicon floor
And kissed in a cyber land.
So now we have each other, my mystery girl and I:
And I think it is enough for now to love her from afar.
For never was there a surer place than in her unknown arms,
To protect myself from the world, and all its painful harms.
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Copyright 2003 Delphoid-Q
Comments on "Digital Love"
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A former member wrote:
Great read about online love hope to see more of these
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A former member wrote:
Love through internet and imagination, i can feel you
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A former member wrote:
I have a friend like that. It reminds me much of us. keep up the good work!
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On Sunday, April 19, 2009, Angelic Darkness
(27) wrote:
So true. Lovely. ~Angie
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On Monday, June 9, 2008, Withering petals
(65) wrote:
:) Nice and openly turthful. ~Downstream~
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On Sunday, November 21, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
weird how we can confide in someone over a Computer screen.. and we tell them our heart and soul, if they ever disapear we beg in our head for them to come back... to talk some more to someone we've never met.. heh life's weird too.. Awesome write! -JiNx
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
This is just wonderful...I am new to your works, and will read more! BTW, The Lady of Shallott is my fave also. FF
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
I think "Digital Love" type poems are going to become rather prevalent in the near future... and I hope they're all as good as this was.
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On Friday, November 14, 2003, sole
(93) wrote:
A great idea and presented beautifully. A good read.
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A former member wrote:
Damnit...I swear I've commented on this before...I had to of...I know I've read it at least a dozen times. Silly me. Anywho, I'm with Urban...very original. I really enjoyed this poem.
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A former member wrote:
Oh I like this, very original. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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On Friday, November 7, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
this piece was intelligent and beautifull..
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On Thursday, October 16, 2003, Loserland
(113) wrote:
distance is the devil!
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
*sigh* it is safer(emotionally) to love so far away.but the body longs to be touched by that love. its hard. ~Drea~
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A former member wrote:
*nods* I've got to agree.
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On Friday, September 26, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
great for u beautiful write i liked it much so, nomatter were u or she are u can find comfort in eachother that is something that some people who see eachother face to face cant even do
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
this is really sweet... ah yes... sometimes i wonder why i like falling in lovew with people who live an ocean or country away... i think it is safer... somewhat.
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On Friday, October 17, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
heh. now that shits come down... it not safer. not safer at all.
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
...and then you find out "the long walks at sunset" she mentioned were only to the fridge. : ) Good piece, I like it! Ciao, T/S
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On Saturday, September 20, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
awww such a sweet piece, love no matter what the circumstances - conquers all!
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On Sunday, September 14, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
wow... This is so good. and true in a moment. Monkey
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On Wednesday, September 10, 2003, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
digital love is oh so much safer
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On Thursday, October 16, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
unless you have really dirty hands.
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On Wednesday, September 10, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Everything Spins In And Out. Change Of Style And Its Good. Ones And Zeros My Good Friend... Ones And Zeros. GPhD.
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On Wednesday, September 10, 2003, Forever Cold
(33) wrote:
this makes me rember things...these things can work out...it is hard work...but it dose happen....tred softly dear..
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On Wednesday, September 10, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
This has made me think, I must come back later when I can comment.....O.
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On Wednesday, September 10, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
A sign of the times, loving/wanting whatever, whoever lays on the other side of the glowing screen. ~ mw
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A former member wrote:
hmm. interesting piece. "our longing reduced to binary" is a Very cool line.
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On Friday, December 12, 2003, Crying_Banshee
(62) wrote:
i think it's easiyer to act fake on internet =/ been there... and it didn't work... digital love is artificial and full of desillusions...nice write though =)
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On Saturday, December 13, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Point taken… Most of it is role-playing requiring no responsibility. Feelings, however, are feelings and must be expressed ;)