Can Josh Seduce You?
By Revolting Theatre
Would it help if I told you your lips (friendly as they are to the poet)
make me st-st-stutter on paper?
Or should I suggest that Heaven be paved with pictures of your eyes instead
of gold?
Perhaps a kiss on the small of your back?
A kiss that takes slow steps to find the sweetest spot
of flesh on the back of your neck.
You'd find my hands have ten close friends that might push themselves to
places forbidden from most men.
All to make you smile, to shorten your breath.
It's hard to conjure dreams much better than that.
I'd steal your feet from under you,
handcuff each limb twice.
My mind gives me a helpful hint,
Would you prefer candle wax...or ice?
I'd pull your hair, drag my nails downs your spine,
p u s h the pleasure out your mouth, just to hear your
brandy brushed voice.
My thoughts are bright light in an empty white room.
You can't escape.
They surround you.
...Would you like to fall in love tonight?
I have a palace just your size.
It exists underneath my covers,
Where you'd be named queen.
Lists of wants await your words.
I'll shower you with fantasy.
Zig-zag's are unnessacary I'll b-line to the point.
Tonight is your night.
Anything you want.
Whatever you enjoy.
A poem a day with the title your name,
can make a man so anxious.
I'm craving you, and I've thought this through.
When we meet, I'll start with a kiss.
Comments on "Can Josh Seduce You?"
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On Wednesday, November 28, 2012, Killerdemonchick
(53) wrote:
Josh can definately seduce me.:) Wax please
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On Sunday, September 30, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I'm your huckleberry baby.. damn.. touch me
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On Sunday, September 30, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
Oh dear God, Josh has thoroughly seduced me. If you need me I'll be taking a cold shower and waiting for seconds.
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A former member wrote:
the answer is yes..and I prefer the wax ;)
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On Friday, February 13, 2009, Gideon Lost
(137) wrote:
Such a sensuous piece. I loved the language and alitteration. Made me wish Josh was gay so I could enjoy him too. - Gideon
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On Monday, December 29, 2008, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
The description in this is well done and the detail amazing. I had a night like this not to long ago and you captured the feelings of it so well if this work.
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On Saturday, November 8, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(287) wrote:
I've read this piece several times without comment--so many times, in fact, I'm feeling a bit peeping-tomish sneaking up for a read and skulking off again. Yes, Josh can seduce me--in fact he already has. Stunning write, love the way I get wrapped up in it. I am especially fond of the fourth stanza and the close is brilliant and seductive.
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On Sunday, March 23, 2008, MGood
(60) wrote:
this is truly beautiful. ~M
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2007, totaltrip
(36) wrote:
i love you. i love you. i love you. i want you. i want you. i want you. sigh. nice. nice. nice. you have me repeating myself to catch up with my thoughts.
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, thelostmessenger
(110) wrote:
can josh seduce you? yep, he can. lol. this poem is amazing. made me squirm in my seat... lovely. *messenger
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On Monday, March 19, 2007, Carmina Gitana
(149) wrote:
I can't imagine any woman wouldn't love to read something like this - I love the lightness mixed in with the lust and the love. It's creamy and frothy at the same time.
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A former member wrote:
i have to say, i've read this poem many times before, and it is still one of my favorites.
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On Thursday, December 14, 2006, beautifulfallenangel
(62) wrote:
whoa.....amazingly beautiful, one lucky girl and it's amzingly sexy also....:)
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On Sunday, April 2, 2006, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this is still one of the most sexy/sensual poems ive read...
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A former member wrote:
"Zig-zag's are unnessacary I'll b-line to the point." yeah that's usually the problem....get lost on your way to the point for about na hour ok?..poem was alright i enjoy some of your other works better
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A former member wrote:
simply that this is like...eh...for a topic to me right now...sorry i'm a little cynical and disintrested in gushy emotional heartstring attachment stuff right now. Nothing personal or anything.
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On Tuesday, September 6, 2005, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
fucking brilliant......beautiful and sensual.............well done..........urban
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On Tuesday, September 6, 2005, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
yes Yes YES!!!!! *whoo hoo* I'm off for a cold shower. I'm favouriting this one... luscious, sensual erotic... *melts in chair*
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A former member wrote:
Hell you can call me tonight lol so we can see wuts up lol
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A former member wrote:
Wow, very seductive, nice piece.
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On Thursday, July 14, 2005, icyhott
(37) wrote:
what can i say that hasn't been said already? except call me your queen and i'll call you my god *hott*
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On Wednesday, June 29, 2005, October Death
(18) wrote:
You can seduce me anyday. *Winks*
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
Wow...Im seduced. lol. Nice work. ~Unlucky
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Oh this sent excitement through me. This is very seductive!
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Elise
(187) wrote:
*melts* I dunno what to say. Wow, I'm glad I found this.
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On Monday, April 4, 2005, Northstar
(374) wrote:
wow--glad i stumbled onto this piece--captivating and sexy the entire way through--very saucy and seductive
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On Monday, April 4, 2005, eastpatient
(47) wrote:
Very seductive. Very nicely written. And slightly dirty. I like.
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On Thursday, March 24, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
simply lovely dearest enchanting -kitty
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On Saturday, March 12, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
all I can say is WOW...
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On Monday, January 10, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this was beautiful, tender, and very sensual. who wouldnt want to be seduced like this? amazing dear ~kristy
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On Sunday, January 9, 2005, Cinn
(152) wrote:
Yes, yes definately seduced. Wow. Amazing write. -Cinn
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On Sunday, December 26, 2004, Dei
(663) wrote:
wow.... a lovely and sultry write. very impressive
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
and the very last stanza was perhaps the most lustrously loving I've read in awhile. .
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
"I'd pull your hair, drag my nails downs your spine, p u s h the pleasure out your mouth", so many beautiful lines in this. . heartmelting but seductive as well. . you can have me :P ;)
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A former member wrote:
*also seduced* awesome. id love to meet you.
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A former member wrote:
I agree with Liz. This was lustful yet gentle. I'm not even sure how to put it into words.
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, Liz
(265) wrote:
Seduction is not love, as you suggest falling into. But between the skill of the poet and the skill of the lover, you make both seem possible to me.
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, Liz
(265) wrote:
Erotica is rarely so heartfelt.
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, Drea
(1388) wrote:
Seductive indeed. This was heaven. The first line was genius. It give a girl thoughts that I almost forgot where there. For that...thank you, heh
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, Atalanta
(37) wrote:
*very seduced*
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
WOW...
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
*seduced*
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A former member wrote:
what he said. ;)
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A former member wrote:
ehem.. haha. i agree with solace on this one. awesomely written, and very seductive, as you implied. nicely done. well written.
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, shortandpretentious
(9) wrote:
dirty... but wonderful
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, island warrior
(210) wrote:
That would definitely seduce many women.