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Comments by The Lipstick Factor

"Lovely, simple, powerful. Everything a poem should be."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Raining Stars" by carlosjackal

"Oh sad! Vividly visual. Love the last line."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "The old young man." by Iwas

"Oh I love! I aspire to madness so this suits me just fine. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "The Mad Hatters' Society" by Malcholm Dark

"That slipping grip we all feel at times, well portrayed. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Overture Of A Madman" by Malcholm Dark

"Well done. Breaks my heart to know that real children live in real fear every day when home is supposed to be place they feel safe. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Things That Go Bump In The Night" by Malcholm Dark

"Oh, I was not expecting that ending! Well played. Very clever manipulation of the reader's emotions throughout. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "The Used To Be Man" by Malcholm Dark

"Brilliantly succinct."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Coldpacked Pantheon" by ALBATROSS

"Nicely done! Like the metaphors, love the way you use language."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "False Alarm" by Revolting Theatre

"Such truth--lovely tribute to one who wrings words from tears and heartbeats...well done!"
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Sirens Lament (Tribute for Saintedmad)" by Leith Plunkett

"Intriguing story...interesting and dynamic plot."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "The Cronicles of David Neirad (continuation of the 13th year)" by maggot death

"Heartbreaking piece. Much to deal with for an eight year old. Rather amazing you could find your way to this write from there. Excellent work."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "once upon a time..." by ebonyamore

"Pretty, pretty words. The last line is simply lovely."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Midnight Orchids" by Leith Plunkett

"Brings to mind Frankenstein--one of my favorite books--nicely done. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Monster Man" by DarkPaladine

"Well captured with good imagery and the last line is like a bullet. Nice work."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Lost soul" by heathenpoetry

"Pretty and fun. Lightness throughout...and then the end...so very profound. Delightful write."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Observant--the Story of a Dried Lotus Fruit" by Henry Coldnight

"Oh this I know well. Excellent job of rendering these emotion poetic. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "The man I knew" by Lylani

""I thrive by clinging desperately To each exquisite memory."--simply lovely lines. Pretty write."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "The Only Secret People Keep is Immortality" by Rhys Ki

""fragmented bone and fermented whiskey. bruise my shadow. cut my flesh. i have plenty to spare. . .--love these lines. Melancholy write, well done. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Mermaid" by Blood Saga

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