and thank you

By Nehema

A work inspired by please.

Quick
as a whip
Between his words
My mind slips

As I grasp
for the tip
Can't seem to
get a grip
Through my fingers
he slips

Tryin not to trip
I wanna take a sip

Of his genius

Feel it trickle
down my lip
Suck it out through
his shtick

Cuz after all I'm just a whore
Beggin' for more

Than I deserve

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Published on Sunday, May 5, 2013. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

...here we go again, maybe. Can't decide. Fuck you too kerry ;)

Works Inspired By "and thank you"

Sheep in Wolves Clothing (featuring the beautiful Dramamine)

Comments on "and thank you"

On Thursday, May 23, 2013, dwells (4285) wrote:

Uh, you broke the rhyme on the last line darling! Now I've gotta go and get up to speed on the latest nonsense. Meanwhile, the barnacle-encrusted garbage sculls do seem to be a bit clannish for no good reason, save to mark their self-proclaimed territorial wells devoid of ink, or another other known moisture. Cheers baby girl!
On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Nehema (960) wrote:

LOL, yeah self important paranoid schizophrenics have to twist shit out of boredom or jealousy, unfortunate when they convince their friends of their delusions, but alas, without stupid crazy cunts this fake ass world would have no drama to entertain those of us with actual lives - XXOO
On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Lydia Jade (1350) wrote:

Draaamaaaa
On Thursday, May 23, 2013, dwells (4285) wrote:

This is Dark Poetry unbound, and loving it, take no prisoners unless they assume the position!
On Thursday, May 23, 2013, dramamine (249) wrote:

haha. twist shit? like there was anything to twist? the message is pretty clear. i think we discussed this. you guys must be bored today.
On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Nehema (960) wrote:

Funny how no one else read negativity into it. We did discuss it and you know I don't think you're a whore and didn't use this as a platform to call you a whore. Idgaf what others think, we talked about that too. I do appreciate all the attention, keep it coming ;)
On Thursday, May 23, 2013, dramamine (249) wrote:

funny how everyone else gives mindless praise no matter the subject or content. either way, pip pip. cheerio! have a neat day.
On Sunday, May 19, 2013, Alchemist (688) wrote:

Now I remember why I love reading you it's not only for your beautiful thoughts but also for works like this, you get me all hot and bothered, Robyn!!!!! A lady in the streets and freak in the bed they deserve their treats too.
On Monday, May 6, 2013, Devilish (2658) wrote:

aweeee i want you to sip on me.. damn it . i love this. long time no post woman.. about time.
On Monday, May 6, 2013, FadedBlues (2169) wrote:

...not sexual, but a desire for the art of language, spoken or written. as it has an aphrodisiac quality, maybe...
On Monday, May 6, 2013, Nehema (960) wrote:

I can always depend on you to see right through the words straight into me. Thank you Blues - XXOO
A former member wrote: i see nothing of your "inspiration" in this. free advertising much? ;) way to take something heartfelt and harrowing and demean it with tawdry smut. also, schtick is decidedly not a sexy word. nice try.
On Monday, May 6, 2013, Nehema (960) wrote:

wow, nothing sexy was intended, but I guess what you read into it says more about you than what this piece is actually about.
A former member wrote: no. i got the poorly attempted depth and subliminal message. haha.
A former member wrote: I have to agree with Brandi... and then I ageree with haunted...
On Sunday, May 5, 2013, Deviated09 (90) wrote:

Very enticing. Nicely written!
On Sunday, May 5, 2013, Star (920) wrote:

i disagree with the last three lines... love you.. (:
On Sunday, May 5, 2013, haunted (850) wrote:

mmm robyn I love it when you talk dirty. this is a very stimulating poem. and you got mad skills in the flow dept. in this. im loving it! awesome!