among the stars, love burns

By FadedBlues

  
a heart that has been broken
will never fully repair
the pain is great
the memory is greater
 
a binding love
a love that is truly immortal
can only be written in the stars
 
where else might it be scribed?
on parchment? on leaves of linen?
on a thing so dispassionate
as a computer screen?
 
I have desired. I have lusted.
I have loved.
among these, love is
a fragile flower
a genuine grace
the greatest gift
 
we are naked, and we are hungry,
and our thirst is a savage beast.
where may we be comforted,
except by love’s hand
 
there is hurt
in every man and woman
who has loved and lost
 
I am a poet ~
there must be more of it in me




 

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Published on Wednesday, June 5, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • blue angel On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, blue angel (1118)By person wrote:

    I saw it featured, again it reaches depths indescribable... immortal poetry, may it be scrolled across those ancient starry skies that crush our souls. :)~

  • Scars of Sin On Saturday, August 24, 2013, Scars of Sin (42)By person wrote:

    LOVE THE LAST LINE, MADE ME SMILE..

  • Velvet Raven On Friday, June 14, 2013, Velvet Raven (208)By person wrote:

    There is more of it in you. and you, Dear Sir or rather Poet, show it each and everyday we get the pleasure to read your words. :) Scholar

  • Stephanie Sideways On Saturday, June 8, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (302)By person wrote:

    Yes you are and yes there is! I confess to having fallen just a little in love with the poet in you ! X

  • A former member wrote: I don't have a proper comment.. the second stanza and that last line were brilliant... Kudos

  • Nehema On Friday, June 7, 2013, Nehema (1260)By person wrote:

    Bookmarked. I can't comment properly at this time, it hit too hard in this moment. I'll have to revisit...- XXOO Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Friday, June 7, 2013, FadedBlues (2948)By person wrote:

    Friends, thanks. it's a circle of dreams & heartaches...

  • M Morgan On Thursday, June 6, 2013, M Morgan (203)By person wrote:

    You probably have more love but also more pain, just because you're a poet. All on you is intensified and remains.

  • Shangri-La On Thursday, June 6, 2013, Shangri-La (111)By person wrote:

    "...love is a fragile flower, a genuine grace, the greatest gift" - Remarkable! So softly worded. Yes, you are indeed a poet.

  • blue angel On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, blue angel (1118)By person wrote:

    Written in blue but expressed blood red passion ~^_^~ I enjoy getting a peek into your mind ,fadedblues* A very pleasing read.. well done !!

  • andhaka On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, andhaka (207)By person wrote:

    Awe you're word choice and the way you present your ideas are always always alwaysss so totally beautiful. I loved this piece and can't wait for more!

  • dwells On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, dwells (5662)By person wrote:

    Writer's block or maybe skepticism - or possibly both? Keep writing and see where it takes you, cheers!

  • Devilish On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, Devilish (3761)By person wrote:

    I am a poet ~ there must be more of it in me... fadedblues.. may i use this line on my profile credited to you please sir. this is amazing . i am a poet.. there must be more of it in me.. wow. im in awe.. Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, FadedBlues (2948)By person wrote:

    use it, Dev, with love...

  • River Lily On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, River Lily (1077)By person wrote:

    Beautiful write :) Scholar

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