(Cult)iVAtioN
By NarcissusNarcosis
Born of the Night
we dress in our own darkness
cultivating, always growing
we're ripe for the harvest
cannot resist it
get a doctor
cuz we're
iNfeCteD
with
the
SicKNesS
catch this, your mind is now twisted..
join us or be possessed
and we break our possessions.
We don't burn books
we kill librarians
Think you're better? Call me the Contrarian...
So much intelligence
it's evident we only strive for excellence
words flowing with elegance
those opposed are irrelevant...
Let us entertain you
we seek to impress and amuse
depress and be recluse
be best and stay aloof...
Stroke our own egos?
We get better and make you do it for us
get ready to sing our chorus
our bubbles can never bust
our skills will never rust
we're sharp enough
to make you lust...
Don't be scared, come one, come all
fall in love with our words
we promise it won't hurt...
well, only a litle...
the pain is extra motivation
So eNjoY,
this is (CuLt)iVatioN...
Comments on "(Cult)iVAtioN"
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A former member wrote:
"We don't burn books / we kill librarians"--yeah, that's pretty inspired, right there. This was obviously quite the big deal, but since I missed out on that party, I'm instead dying to know what the title means, 'cus, um, admittedly I've been trying to figure out what the significance of the capitalization represents for awhile, but no luck. So maybe a little birdy will sing a bird song on the subject. Favorite line: "cuz we're infected with the sickness / catch this your mind is now twisted." Just can't resist. But "our skills will never rust / we're sharp enough" is a pretty special one too. You harness those double meanings like a pro--always nodding to a steely finish . . .
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A former member wrote:
This is amazing, I love how one line fits with the next
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On Wednesday, July 31, 2013, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
Mmm... Wish I had an ego to stroke! Your words muse me.. Bows sir-
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On Monday, July 22, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Another sharp-edged simile with a satirical slant, well-hewn, and we grow like weeds! Cheers
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On Sunday, July 21, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
And what a great cult to be part of. This was nicely put & fun to read. When we get better, we'll take over! Mwahahaha
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On Sunday, July 21, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Impeccable flourishing for the mind, perfection every time ~^_^~ May your harvest be bountiful, NN* ;)~
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On Sunday, July 21, 2013, Star
(879) wrote:
Can I join? :P
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On Sunday, July 21, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Ok now I can tell you exactly what this means to me. First off the rhythm of it is flawless.. The rhyme is unbelievably good. I am honored by your return and love you as a friend a poet and strength i needed . .i love you .Oh and fuck that i can't end this without letting you know if i ever see you in real person i am going to swallow your entire being keep you inside of me running through my veins.. i crave the taste of your sinister blood..
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A former member wrote:
I Love it!!! represented our cult so nicely!!! * applauds * after we are done carving our symbols into our wrists we need to order the black candles so we can sacrifice the virgins properly!!!
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On Sunday, July 21, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Lmfao you are your mothers daughter.. i have never been so proud..
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A former member wrote:
Well we can't waist the virgins!!!
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On Sunday, July 21, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Omg...I just came... I wonder if you ever get tired of hearing that? Lmao, you are amazing. Past, present and can't wait for the future... Contrarian...lmao - XXOO
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On Sunday, July 21, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
So much intelligence it's evident we only strive for excellence words flowing with elegance those opposed are irrelevant...,, this is going on my profile.. i have to comment twice be back