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Until We Meet Again
By cre
-as the mother to her child-
-and a god to his creation-
-fear the day the tables turn-
-for you built your own damnation-
your
lips kissed and breathed
and something died inside of me
broken, though something else and something new
lay born and softly learning
lay hoping and silently lay yearning
to someday kill and oh, to break you too
to whisper in the wind
that stole into my room
beyond the shadows and the gloom
to suck this scent
this stale cologne
this bleeding grip that would never let me be
alone
these glances, oh they linger
in the hallways as I pass
and these mirrors that I shatter
deny your words that claim it never mattered
and I know someday you'll die with me at last
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-just because I sit and do not
speak-
-just because you hear no sound from me-
-does not mean I feel no rage inside-
-does not mean I don't still wait for you to die-
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usque ad nos iterum conveniemus,
Godspeed.
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Copyright 2004 cre
Published on Wednesday, August 11, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Thursday, March 8, 2012, Deviated09
(90)
wrote:
This is a very truely good write. You are a gifted writer. I hope your talents have held strong for you over the years since this was written. Thank you for the great material.
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On Friday, September 28, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Beautifully dar piece - reminds me a bit of Poe, for some reason. I miss seeing new things from you, but I'm glad to at least be able to read some of your stuff. Ciao, Steve
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On Monday, January 3, 2005, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
I enjoyed the entire poem. The first stanza though, sounds absolutely scholarly. I really believe you are gifted with more than ordinary insight.
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On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Some how, I saw and touched so much more of this poem tonight, then I did the first time I read it. Since, I must have read it a good 15x. Just thought I'd leave a note, letting you know this didn't drift from my mind like so much usualy does0:)
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
wow! awesome! this was just fabulously done.
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On Sunday, September 26, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
*Slightly creeped out now.*
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
soaked with intense feelings & wow, what strong emotions conjured after i read this..wonderfully done piece of work. -MeL-
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On Sunday, September 19, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Some times your poetry doesn't give me thought, or words per say, but pictures that take time for me to interpret, and once I do, the scene is amazing,as with "Until We Meet Again".
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On Wednesday, August 25, 2004, Jonas
(720) wrote:
the gray lines are definitely worth noting... beautifully ugly and haunting. hi, janie-pie, by the by.
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A former member wrote:
the meter is excellent, as purr said..really, I doubt there's much more I can say here, except I do know this feeling and you, as always, express it so well
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A former member wrote:
oh, and by the way....no going away again, dammit!!! ;P
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On Thursday, August 12, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
So captivating, really delicate and beautifully flowing. A really beautiful kind of saddness, one that I admire. Amazing work, engulfing.
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, antiScripsony
(30) wrote:
usque means always, ad means to, nos means we, iterum means again and conveniemus means we meet. A better translation would be "Dum conveniemus iterum". Nos isn't required, but you can add it for emphasis.
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
I hate latin.. for instance, 'again' could be denuo (anew-a second time) or iterum (again and again-a second time).. my head hurts...
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, antiScripsony
(30) wrote:
Dig the wordzez. I totally want to know who it's about. And I hope it's not... me... that you wait to die... plz? You write sort of like me in your eyes, as you leave me desperate to pick your brain.
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On Thursday, August 12, 2004, cre
(411) wrote:
you freak, of course I don't wait for you to die :P
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
LOVE the opening stanza - excellent metre, as ever, also... true high quality from you, unfailingly. :)
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Jane...you've been gone for a while...but this proves that talent does not dwindle. Great write..as usual.
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A former member wrote:
this was absolutely sic, much appreciation for this peice cre, a diamond in the dust, love the style of this.
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A former member wrote:
Awesome work hun, Just wish I knew what inspired it... 'There is no Apple'
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
Wow. I loved this piece. The second stanza especially caught me. There is much more below this surface, and oh what I wouldnt give to see it's truth entirely. You've intrigued me. Very good piece. Very good indeed. -Glass
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, cre
(411) wrote:
I want that next to last line to say "Until We Meet Again" soo if there happens to be a latin genius amongst you who can correct what I'm sure I have penned incorrectly, please let me know. Much obliged.
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