the big dipper

By gumshoe

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we
here                           are
connecting              with the stars
writing our history           amongst the
constellations            after a misguided
shooting star                  ensnared you
I find            even the weight of my
words                      crush
me.

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Published on Wednesday, January 2, 2013. Filed under:

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January 23rd, 2014

Comments on "the big dipper"

On Thursday, January 4, 2018, Cassette (1087) wrote:

you're a master of formatting.... this is superb.
On Wednesday, December 21, 2016, sIo (898) wrote:

Very gloomy but sweet
A former member wrote: I love the style that you wrote, the wording made it even better thumbs up
On Sunday, July 28, 2013, blue angel (866) wrote:

Astronomically penned ;)~ love it ~^_^~
A former member wrote: absolutely amazing. the structure made this even more brilliant.
A former member wrote: Sublime. Captures ennui.
On Monday, May 6, 2013, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Brilliant structure and words of resonance.
On Friday, April 12, 2013, knightmirror (426) wrote:

Wow... very likeable and interesting structure... not to mention the content is right up my alley... I believe this is the first piece Ive read of yours... and I have to say I will be back to read more... thank you for sharing this...-knight
On Tuesday, March 12, 2013, Dei (663) wrote:

what an interesting style to express. this was expression in an exhale. momentary and cleansing with acceptance.