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the big dipper
By gumshoe
c:: :. . . . .
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O
we
here are
connecting with the stars
writing our history amongst the
constellations after a misguided
shooting star ensnared you
I find even the weight of my
words crush
me.
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Copyright 2013 gumshoe
Published on Wednesday, January 2, 2013.
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On Thursday, January 4, 2018, Cassette
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wrote:
you're a master of formatting.... this is superb.
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On Wednesday, December 21, 2016, sIo
(926) wrote:
Very gloomy but sweet
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A former member wrote:
I love the style that you wrote, the wording made it even better thumbs up
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On Sunday, July 28, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Astronomically penned ;)~ love it ~^_^~
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A former member wrote:
absolutely amazing. the structure made this even more brilliant.
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A former member wrote:
Sublime. Captures ennui.
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On Monday, May 6, 2013, carlosjackal
(3015) wrote:
Brilliant structure and words of resonance.
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On Friday, April 12, 2013, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
Wow... very likeable and interesting structure... not to mention the content is right up my alley... I believe this is the first piece Ive read of yours... and I have to say I will be back to read more... thank you for sharing this...-knight
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On Tuesday, March 12, 2013, Dei
(665) wrote:
what an interesting style to express. this was expression in an exhale. momentary and cleansing with acceptance.
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